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A teenage lumberjack wannabe struggles with his ironically hipster appearance as he figures out what it means to be a man.
The scene where the tree falls on the car is a keeper. (Is this a comedy?) In this case, a logline would describe not what the MC wants to be but what he does to become. So if he's a "wannabe lumberjack" -- if that's his working definition of a manly man -- then it seems to me his goal would be to gRead more
The scene where the tree falls on the car is a keeper. (Is this a comedy?)
In this case, a logline would describe not what the MC wants to be but what he does to become. So if he’s a “wannabe lumberjack” — if that’s his working definition of a manly man — then it seems to me his goal would be to get hired as a full-time lumberjack.
BTW: Becoming a lumberjack could be the wrong goal to fulfill his subjective need to define himself with a manly occupation. Which he discovers after he achieves the goal — through hilarious missteps and misadventures– or discovers after struggling to achieve the goal only to fail — after hilarious missteps and misadventures. The critical issue is that logline informs readers that he is taking steps, that he is struggling to reach a specific goal.
See lessA teenage lumberjack wannabe struggles with his ironically hipster appearance as he figures out what it means to be a man.
The scene where the tree falls on the car is a keeper. (Is this a comedy?) In this case, a logline would describe not what the MC wants to be but what he does to become. So if he's a "wannabe lumberjack" -- if that's his working definition of a manly man -- then it seems to me his goal would be to gRead more
The scene where the tree falls on the car is a keeper. (Is this a comedy?)
In this case, a logline would describe not what the MC wants to be but what he does to become. So if he’s a “wannabe lumberjack” — if that’s his working definition of a manly man — then it seems to me his goal would be to get hired as a full-time lumberjack.
BTW: Becoming a lumberjack could be the wrong goal to fulfill his subjective need to define himself with a manly occupation. Which he discovers after he achieves the goal — through hilarious missteps and misadventures– or discovers after struggling to achieve the goal only to fail — after hilarious missteps and misadventures. The critical issue is that logline informs readers that he is taking steps, that he is struggling to reach a specific goal.
See lessWhen an out of work teacher is given a deadline by a loan shark, he contracts a hit-man on himself so his family can collect on his life insurance. However after he befriends the hit-man they decide to fake his death instead.
What is the end goal, the final objective they want to "fight" for?
What is the end goal, the final objective they want to “fight” for?
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