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In order to create a replacement ?Master Vampire? after his is accidentally killed, a perfectionist thrall has 48 hours to steal and consume the blood of 100 virgins from a mobile high-school blood bank, before he and his master's other sons' powers wain, and they succumb to mortality.
When his vampire master dies, a vampire servant has 100 hours to break into blood banks, identify, and consume the blood of a 100 virgins or else he and his fellow servants will die. It's a situation comedy, right...right? (I expanded "thrall" to "vampire servant" for the sake of the uninitiated.)
When his vampire master dies, a vampire servant has 100 hours to break into blood banks, identify, and consume the blood of a 100 virgins or else he and his fellow servants will die.
It’s a situation comedy, right…right?
(I expanded “thrall” to “vampire servant” for the sake of the uninitiated.)
See lessIn order to create a replacement ?Master Vampire? after his is accidentally killed, a perfectionist thrall has 48 hours to steal and consume the blood of 100 virgins from a mobile high-school blood bank, before he and his master's other sons' powers wain, and they succumb to mortality.
When his vampire master dies, a vampire servant has 100 hours to break into blood banks, identify, and consume the blood of a 100 virgins or else he and his fellow servants will die. It's a situation comedy, right...right? (I expanded "thrall" to "vampire servant" for the sake of the uninitiated.)
When his vampire master dies, a vampire servant has 100 hours to break into blood banks, identify, and consume the blood of a 100 virgins or else he and his fellow servants will die.
It’s a situation comedy, right…right?
(I expanded “thrall” to “vampire servant” for the sake of the uninitiated.)
See lessBlue collar forty something finds time in his harried day to be a loving husband, caring father, dependable son, mob enforcer, and a violent sadistic killer all while masking his true identity.
>> the mob and CIA been in cahoots for years and this is lightly based off a true story It's not exactly a state secret that the CIA has worked with the mob on international hit jobs -- like attempting to assassinate Castro. But conspiring with the mob on domestic hit jobs is a whole other ball gameRead more
>> the mob and CIA been in cahoots for years and this is lightly based off a true story
It’s not exactly a state secret that the CIA has worked with the mob on international hit jobs — like attempting to assassinate Castro. But conspiring with the mob on domestic hit jobs is a whole other ball game. I’m not saying the CIA has never played that game. Who knows? They operate in the shadows and along the borders of legality.
But I seriously doubt if it constitutes standard operating procedure. And I have no doubt that such cases would be blatantly illegal — in egregious and intentional violation of federal statutes. And there is no way the CIA could cover its rear end politically before the U.S. Congress and the legally in the federal courts if the cover was blown (as they can and do on international jobs).
And if that’s the covert and illegal game your protagonist is playing — you gotta hook. Well, one that hooks my interest, a story line more interesting than the ol’ yada-yada about double agents and dual lives. Not only because he would be operating outside the bounds of the law, but because of the additional jeopardy and stakes such illegal activity entails: if he’s caught, if his cover is blown, the agency won’t come to his rescue, won’t bring him in from the cold. He will be abandoned to twist slowly, slowly in the wind (to mix/mangle metaphors) or he would be “allowed” to be terminated with extreme prejudice.
“The problem with living outside the law is that you no longer have its protection.”
— Truman Capote
And if that’s the hook, best wishes with your project.
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