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A shy tech creator finds romance with a free spirited artist during his commute to work.
There is always a market for romantic movies. But as currently written, the logline is more of a statement of a situation than a plot. Furthermore, the match up of temperaments, shy vs. free-spirited, is rather a standard technique for generating complications in romances. The premise wants for a hoRead more
There is always a market for romantic movies. But as currently written, the logline is more of a statement of a situation than a plot. Furthermore, the match up of temperaments, shy vs. free-spirited, is rather a standard technique for generating complications in romances.
The premise wants for a hook, something that makes the concept instantly interesting — AND stand out as fresh, quirky, different form all the other romantic movies made about shy vs. free-spirited people.
Who is the protagonist? The guy? If so, what is his objective goal? What is his game plan for attracting her attention and getting her interested in him?
What/or who stands in the way of his objective goal? His shyness is certainly a complication, but is that the only reason he’s having difficulty hooking up with her? Does he have competition? Is there a rival for her attention?
What’s at stake? Well, of course, love. But what else? Why does he need her love? Why must he have it? Why should we in the audience root for him to win her affection rather than, say, someone else?
fwiw
See lessA shy tech creator finds romance with a free spirited artist during his commute to work.
There is always a market for romantic movies. But as currently written, the logline is more of a statement of a situation than a plot. Furthermore, the match up of temperaments, shy vs. free-spirited, is rather a standard technique for generating complications in romances. The premise wants for a hoRead more
There is always a market for romantic movies. But as currently written, the logline is more of a statement of a situation than a plot. Furthermore, the match up of temperaments, shy vs. free-spirited, is rather a standard technique for generating complications in romances.
The premise wants for a hook, something that makes the concept instantly interesting — AND stand out as fresh, quirky, different form all the other romantic movies made about shy vs. free-spirited people.
Who is the protagonist? The guy? If so, what is his objective goal? What is his game plan for attracting her attention and getting her interested in him?
What/or who stands in the way of his objective goal? His shyness is certainly a complication, but is that the only reason he’s having difficulty hooking up with her? Does he have competition? Is there a rival for her attention?
What’s at stake? Well, of course, love. But what else? Why does he need her love? Why must he have it? Why should we in the audience root for him to win her affection rather than, say, someone else?
fwiw
See lessAfter an outbound insurance sales call ends in a supernatural plea for help from a terrified mother, a geeky telemarketer who can locate anything must overcome the trauma his ability once caused him in order to save a kidnapped girl.
So, he has some kind of psychic gift? Is this a story where characters and/or situations depart from the normal rules of physics, chemistry, cognition that pertain to the world as we know it?
So, he has some kind of psychic gift? Is this a story where characters and/or situations depart from the normal rules of physics, chemistry, cognition that pertain to the world as we know it?
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