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After an outbound insurance sales call ends in a supernatural plea for help from a terrified mother, a geeky telemarketer who can locate anything must overcome the trauma his ability once caused him in order to save a kidnapped girl.
Richiev is spot on. And even as revised, I still think there is a mismatch between the character flaw and the goal. I subscribe to the notion that a good plot is a conspiracy against the protagonist. It is an attack at the defense mechanisms, the psychic armor, the protagonist has been hiding behindRead more
Richiev is spot on. And even as revised, I still think there is a mismatch between the character flaw and the goal.
I subscribe to the notion that a good plot is a conspiracy against the protagonist. It is an attack at the defense mechanisms, the psychic armor, the protagonist has been hiding behind rather than confront a character weakness or personal problem.
What personal problem does the kidnapping force the telemarketer to deal with? What character flaw must he overcome in order to rescue the girl?
See lessAfter an outbound insurance sales call ends in a supernatural plea for help from a terrified mother, a geeky telemarketer who can locate anything must overcome the trauma his ability once caused him in order to save a kidnapped girl.
Richiev is spot on. And even as revised, I still think there is a mismatch between the character flaw and the goal. I subscribe to the notion that a good plot is a conspiracy against the protagonist. It is an attack at the defense mechanisms, the psychic armor, the protagonist has been hiding behindRead more
Richiev is spot on. And even as revised, I still think there is a mismatch between the character flaw and the goal.
I subscribe to the notion that a good plot is a conspiracy against the protagonist. It is an attack at the defense mechanisms, the psychic armor, the protagonist has been hiding behind rather than confront a character weakness or personal problem.
What personal problem does the kidnapping force the telemarketer to deal with? What character flaw must he overcome in order to rescue the girl?
See lessA temple virgin uncovers a secret that the high priest would rather conceal: the Day of Atonement isn't working anymore. When he marries her off to a hundred year-old man, she loses everything she's ever known. Now she must find a way to prevent another unjust marriage — and restore the Atonement — before it's too late.
Not only does the logline have 2 inciting incidents, it has 2 objective goals.
Not only does the logline have 2 inciting incidents, it has 2 objective goals.
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