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A timid taxi driver must foil a contract killer’s plan to kill five people in one night after being forced to transport him around L.A.
Paul Clarke:You raised an interesting point.? Yes, it's a great twist for Max, the taxi driver, to discover that Annie, the attorney he flirted with, is on the hit list.But...With one exception, the general rule is that the logline focuses on events up to the transition into Act 2.? That is, the eveRead more
Paul Clarke:
You raised an interesting point.? Yes, it’s a great twist for Max, the taxi driver, to discover that Annie, the attorney he flirted with, is on the hit list.
But…
With one exception, the general rule is that the logline focuses on events up to the transition into Act 2.? That is, the events that can quickly hook an audience’s interest.? In this age of multitasking minds, when people have so many options for entertainment so many distractions, I think it’s accurate to say that it’s more imperative than ever that a film quickly grab and hold attention.? Before something else does.
The exception is that sometimes (space permitting) it’s good to include the MPR (Midpoint Reversal), when it entails? a cool twist that “sweetens” the initial hook.
However, Max doesn’t discover Annie is on the hit list until 94 minutes into the film.? That’s f-a-r too late to qualify as the MPR.? Indeed, the discovery can be said to be the inciting incident of the last act.
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As I said previously, I am intrigued by the premise. But upon further reflection, I have had a reality-check moment.? If traditional patriarchal values prevent her from having a claim to her father's inheritance as a girl, why would they recognize that she has a legitimate claims after the sex-changRead more
As I said previously, I am intrigued by the premise.
But upon further reflection, I have had a reality-check moment.? If traditional patriarchal values prevent her from having a claim to her father’s inheritance as a girl, why would they recognize that she has a legitimate claims after the sex-change operation?? Surely, the sex-change will deeply offend them, violate all their traditional values.? Why would they recognize her as a legit guy when she will still be unable to perform the most important duty required of a male in a patriarchal system:? to wit, sire offspring.? So they won’t recognize, won’t accept her as a genuine guy.
If anything, the more credible response would be for them to cast her out, reject her as one of the family altogether.
Just saying.
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1] While ever mindful of the standard formulation,? I'm not married to it.? I opted to place the story hook first.? There's no mistaking the inciting incident even though it comes at the end of the sentence.2] I read my loglines aloud to sense how they sound.? It sounded better to lead off with theRead more
1] While ever mindful of the standard formulation,? I’m not married to it.? I opted to place the story hook first.? There’s no mistaking the inciting incident even though it comes at the end of the sentence.
2] I read my loglines aloud to sense how they sound.? It sounded better to lead off with the nature of? his dramatic predicament, rather than the cause.
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