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  1. Posted: January 20, 2014In: Public

    Following a botched circumcision while defending a drug-addicted prostitute accused of murder after years of abuse at the hands of her alcoholic mother and stepfather… Wan Hung Lo goes on a quest to find the doctor who did it to him.

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    Added an answer on January 20, 2014 at 1:40 pm

    Why does the Chinese man need to be circumcised?

    Why does the Chinese man need to be circumcised?

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  2. Posted: January 16, 2014In: Public

    When a stern principal asks a new teacher to look over a specific child the new teacher finds herself in the middle of a family breakdown.

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    Added an answer on January 17, 2014 at 11:50 am

    In the logline, the teacher comes off as passive: She's asked to do investigate rather than take the initiative herself, and she "finds herself" rather than does something. Edgewater's statements based upon his experience suggest a better way to generate dramatic conflict: 1] She takes the initiativRead more

    In the logline, the teacher comes off as passive: She’s asked to do investigate rather than take the initiative herself, and she “finds herself” rather than does something.

    Edgewater’s statements based upon his experience suggest a better way to generate dramatic conflict: 1] She takes the initiative to investigate — doesn’t wait for someone to ask her. 2] She chooses to get deeply involved in spite of official policies and procedures.

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  3. Posted: January 15, 2014In: Public

    RE WRITE Prisoners escaping a galactic penal colonel make an emergency landing only to find themselves trapped,having to outwit a psychopathic,shape shifting android intent on re-enacting the twisted deaths from old horror movies.

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    Added an answer on January 16, 2014 at 9:29 am

    The only specified "character" is the antagonist -- an interesting character -- but not one to root for. Although the android is going after escaped criminals -- maybe they're getting their just desserts? Anyway, why should the audience care whether they live or die? And speaking of the comparison tRead more

    The only specified “character” is the antagonist — an interesting character — but not one to root for. Although the android is going after escaped criminals — maybe they’re getting their just desserts? Anyway, why should the audience care whether they live or die?

    And speaking of the comparison to the Terminator franchise, the Terminator, for better or worse, was on a mission, had a specific objective goal in relationship to the protagonist: in the 1st movie, to kill Sarah Connor; in the 2nd movie to save Sara Connor and her son. What is the android’s specific objective goal in relationship to the protagonist?

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