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  1. Posted: January 11, 2014In: Public

    A Harlem orphan must face the federal Government and the world's largest corporations after he mysteriously wakes up on his 18th birthday with $458 Billion to his name.

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    Added an answer on January 12, 2014 at 1:35 am

    I like the general premise: that money, enough money to enable him to dramatically change his life, suddenly shows up in his bank account. Maybe its drug money deposited in the wrong account. Maybe the orphan takes the money and runs with the drug mob and the Feds in hot pursuit. Or some such. WhatRead more

    I like the general premise: that money, enough money to enable him to dramatically change his life, suddenly shows up in his bank account. Maybe its drug money deposited in the wrong account. Maybe the orphan takes the money and runs with the drug mob and the Feds in hot pursuit. Or some such.

    What I have difficulty swallowing is the amount. $485 billion isn’t believable — unless the genre is fantasy or absurdist, like it’s all happening in a dream, or a parallel universe.

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  2. Posted: January 11, 2014In: Public

    While seeking inspiration for his writing, a high school senior gets caught up in the unorthodox sabotage of a rival school's prom, set in motion by a Prep, a Drugee, a playboy, and a billionaire's son.

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    Added an answer on January 12, 2014 at 1:06 am

    Could the motivation be stronger? Such as the kid is an envious outsider desperate to do whatever it takes to become an insider, an accepted member of the reigning school clique so he has enough social status to impress/win the heart of a girl. That's something more viewers can identify with. Some tRead more

    Could the motivation be stronger? Such as the kid is an envious outsider desperate to do whatever it takes to become an insider, an accepted member of the reigning school clique so he has enough social status to impress/win the heart of a girl. That’s something more viewers can identify with. Some teens may want to become writers; all teens want to belong to a social group and get the girl (or boy).

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  3. Posted: January 11, 2014In: Public

    "When Paul, a lonely high school student, starts seeing his negative emotions manifest in the form of people he will have to confront the greatest enemy of all: himself."

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    Added an answer on January 12, 2014 at 12:58 am

    When a teenager's negative emotions come alive as school bullies, he must vanquish each one until he faces the biggest bully of all: himself.

    When a teenager’s negative emotions come alive as school bullies, he must vanquish each one until he faces the biggest bully of all: himself.

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