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?On his first day at Walmart, an ex-marine with PTSD must save his sister after eco-terrorists seize the store and take hostages.
Yeah, some kind of yada-yada-mart. I like the idea of "empower the employee" slogans. You can use it Act 1 to set up dramatic irony. Everyone hears them so often they roll their eyes, shrug it off as corporate cant. Then in Act 2 and 3, the ex-marine has to take power, exercise initiative -- act outRead more
Yeah, some kind of yada-yada-mart.
I like the idea of “empower the employee” slogans. You can use it Act 1 to set up dramatic irony. Everyone hears them so often they roll their eyes, shrug it off as corporate cant. Then in Act 2 and 3, the ex-marine has to take power, exercise initiative — act out the slogans in an heroic manner.
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Yes, if you're going for comedy, that would be a great climax: all is lost. Batman is doomed -- until he's saved by a flash mob. An updated version of a deus ex machina! (Properly handled you can get away with a deus ex machina in comedy. Aristotle objected to the deus ex machina gimmick in tragedyRead more
Yes, if you’re going for comedy, that would be a great climax: all is lost. Batman is doomed — until he’s saved by a flash mob. An updated version of a deus ex machina! (Properly handled you can get away with a deus ex machina in comedy. Aristotle objected to the deus ex machina gimmick in tragedy — but not in comedy.)
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I like the concept though I can't imagine Walmart would ever allow their name to be used Of course, you can come up with some other name for a mega-corporate discount chain and people will still get the idea.
I like the concept though I can’t imagine Walmart would ever allow their name to be used Of course, you can come up with some other name for a mega-corporate discount chain and people will still get the idea.
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