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When a power-hungry villain begins stealing electricity, A young man with electric superpowers must learn to accept the balance of good and evil within himself before humanity is sent back to the Dark Ages.
As Richiev said.? The logline confuses the objective goal with the subjective need.? Loglines are about objective goals, not subjective needs.? The character's subjective need may be to come to terms with his own inner duality before he can achieve his objective goal (per the standard formulation ofRead more
As Richiev said.? The logline confuses the objective goal with the subjective need.? Loglines are about objective goals, not subjective needs.? The character’s subjective need may be to come to terms with his own inner duality before he can achieve his objective goal (per the standard formulation of the relationship between the subjective need and the objective goal) but his objective goal is… well, what?
See lessWhen a transgender black woman kills a mentally ill murderer, she is put on trial for life, the jury, who vary from rich to poor to caring to prejudiced,? are caught up in a spiral of grey areas – and a case that exposes the increasingly mad world they live in.
What do you think is the story hook? (And yes, drop the "...increasingly mad world...".? A logline should tell the plot, not telegraph the message.)
What do you think is the story hook?
(And yes, drop the “…increasingly mad world…”.? A logline should tell the plot, not telegraph the message.)
See lessA young man with electric superpowers must find the balance of good and evil within himself before a villain sends humanity back to the Dark Ages.
A logline is about a plot, the pursuit of an objective goal.? The action of the plot toward that goal must be visible.? What's the visual for "find the balance of good and evil within himself"?? What will that look like on a movie screen?
A logline is about a plot, the pursuit of an objective goal.? The action of the plot toward that goal must be visible.? What’s the visual for “find the balance of good and evil within himself”?? What will that look like on a movie screen?
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