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  1. Posted: September 3, 2019In: Examples, War

    When a skilled but reckless sergeant takes over a bomb disposal team in war-torn Iraq, his weary crew must struggle even harder to survive the last 38 days of their tour.

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    Added an answer on September 3, 2019 at 4:12 am

    The story introduces the two weary members of the bomb disposal team first. ?In the 1st ten minutes of the film, their team leader dies in a disposal mission that goes south.? This establishes the status quo: ?the team is engaged in extremely dangerous work; every mission is a matter of life or deatRead more

    The story introduces the two weary members of the bomb disposal team first. ?In the 1st ten minutes of the film, their team leader dies in a disposal mission that goes south.? This establishes the status quo: ?the team is engaged in extremely dangerous work; every mission is a matter of life or death.

    Enter their new sergeant: his insouciant disregard for safety and proper procedure on next outing is the inciting incident.? At the end of Act 1 (page 31 of the script) the two weary men lay down the marker of the ticking clock:

    Eldridge: It?s just thirty-nine days.
    Sanborn: Thirty-eight. Assuming we survive today.
    Eldridge: Tick-tock. Tick tock.

    But the sergeant, ?Will James, is not counting down the days.? War is not hell for him.? It?s the source of one drug-free high after another. In contrast to them, he relishes the risks.? He?s a war-junkie, addicted to the adrenaline rush, the dopamine spike, the serotonin release and euphoria that comes from surviving another life-or-death situation.

    The script and film start off with a quote: ?The rush of battle is a potent and often lethal addiction, for war is a drug?. (Chris Hedges, ?War is a Force that gives us Meaning?)

    The screenwriter, Mark Boal, named the war-junkie Will James — an homage to the American philosopher and psychologist William James.? His essays on the psychology of war, such as ?The Moral Equivalent of War? and ?The Energies of Man?, deeply inform the story.

    So the plot is driven by a main character who makes an already perilous situation even more so. His behavior raises the dramatic question of the film: ?Will they all be able to survive 38 days of his reckless leadership?

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  2. Posted: September 1, 2019In: SciFi

    In a bid to reduce population, the dead are allowed to live again virtually, and when it becomes illegal for living people to post their opinion online, billions commit suicide while others risk their lives.

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    Added an answer on September 2, 2019 at 11:44 pm

    As mikepedley said.? I think you have an intriguing premise, but it needs a specific plot, one focused on a singular protagonist.

    As mikepedley said.? I think you have an intriguing premise, but it needs a specific plot, one focused on a singular protagonist.

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  3. Posted: September 1, 2019In: Comedy

    After peeing on a stick, an aging party girl who has it all: the fiance, the house, the job .. and the crippling anxiety ? must decide if she?s ?old enough? to have her baby.

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    Added an answer on September 2, 2019 at 11:38 pm

    I like the idea of a woman faced with an inciting incident that forces her to must finally start acting her age.? However, I would like one more clarification.? When you say she's "aging" -- approximately what age do you have in mind?? Mid 30's, on the cusp of 40... or?? I think that needs to be madRead more

    I like the idea of a woman faced with an inciting incident that forces her to must finally start acting her age.? However, I would like one more clarification.? When you say she’s “aging” — approximately what age do you have in mind?? Mid 30’s, on the cusp of 40… or?? I think that needs to be made a little more specific because it seems to be a important story element.

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