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  1. Posted: September 6, 2019In: Drama

    When a transgender black woman kills a mentally ill murderer, she is put on trial for life, the jury, who vary from rich to poor to caring to prejudiced,? are caught up in a spiral of grey areas – and a case that exposes the increasingly mad world they live in.

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    Added an answer on September 6, 2019 at 5:10 am

    Agree with yqwertz.? Taking the law into her own hands isn't a justifiable legal defense.? There has to be the possibility of some reasonable doubt as to the evidence and circumstances motivating her deed.

    Agree with yqwertz.? Taking the law into her own hands isn’t a justifiable legal defense.? There has to be the possibility of some reasonable doubt as to the evidence and circumstances motivating her deed.

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  2. Posted: September 6, 2019In: Thriller

    Unable to come to terms with her stillbirth, a desperate doula fakes a pregnancy and kidnaps an expectant be mother to steal her baby. Can she kill her or let her go, risking everything.

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    Added an answer on September 6, 2019 at 5:03 am

    It's an interesting idea, but I suggest a role switch.? The doula is an unsympathetic character; the loss of her own child does not justify stealing someone else's and killing the mother. It's a morally repugnant act.However, if you refocus the story, make the pregnant woman the protagonist, the vicRead more

    It’s an interesting idea, but I suggest a role switch.? The doula is an unsympathetic character; the loss of her own child does not justify stealing someone else’s and killing the mother. It’s a morally repugnant act.

    However, if you refocus the story, make the pregnant woman the protagonist, the victim of the desperate doula, then the premise could make for some compelling drama.

    Another suggestion:? make the pregnant woman a newly arrived, illegal Latina, fleeing violence and poverty in her own country with no family or friends in the USA. Which makes her a natural target for the doula’s scheme:? who will know or miss her?

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: September 5, 2019In: Horror

    A family of four move into a house in a small house only to find out there is more than meets the eye, the house sucks people alive. how will the family survive?

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    Added an answer on September 5, 2019 at 3:07 am

    Solution:? immediately move out.? End of film. Well, why not?And "House sucks people alive" is grammatically incorrect.? And in a logline the dramatic question should be implied, not explicitly stated.

    Solution:? immediately move out.? End of film.

    Well, why not?

    And “House sucks people alive” is grammatically incorrect.? And in a logline the dramatic question should be implied, not explicitly stated.

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