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After his daughter's forced to spend the week at his job and discovers he's actually cool at work, a henpecked husband, begins to stand up for himself against his, domineering wife.
Okay, but: since the inciting incident is the daughter having to spend a day at work with him, it seems to me that the job should be more than a convenient setup to be thrown away after the 1st act. What makes the job so cool if that coolness doesn't entail what he struggling to achieve? And may faiRead more
Okay, but: since the inciting incident is the daughter having to spend a day at work with him, it seems to me that the job should be more than a convenient setup to be thrown away after the 1st act.
What makes the job so cool if that coolness doesn’t entail what he struggling to achieve? And may fail to achieve with stakes for the family — unemployment (if he’s a wage-slave), bankruptcy (if he’s self-employed).
See lessWhen a lonely 30-year old boss dreams about a mirror that shows you the way you?re going to die. He decides to find it but isn?t happy with what he sees, so he has to change his life so he can die happy. /Matilda
Suggestion: bring the story into the 21st century. He downloads a phone app that shows him how he's going to die. Or he gets a video embedded in an email with the same information. He dismisses it as a joke, spam, because he gets the same video every day until he changes.
Suggestion: bring the story into the 21st century. He downloads a phone app that shows him how he’s going to die. Or he gets a video embedded in an email with the same information. He dismisses it as a joke, spam, because he gets the same video every day until he changes.
See lessAfter his daughter's forced to spend the week at his job and discovers he's actually cool at work, a henpecked husband, begins to stand up for himself against his, domineering wife.
What's Mr. Henpecked's objective goal? What is he struggling to accomplish at work that daughter comes to appreciate, but his wife doesn't? What's at stake if he fails at achieving his objective goal at work and/or if standing up on the homefront doesn't work with his wife?
What’s Mr. Henpecked’s objective goal? What is he struggling to accomplish at work that daughter comes to appreciate, but his wife doesn’t?
What’s at stake if he fails at achieving his objective goal at work and/or if standing up on the homefront doesn’t work with his wife?
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