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The disfigured adopted son of a faith healer conspires to run away from home after he falls in love with glam rock and a beautiful yet rebellious crossdresser named Esmeralda in 1980s Nevada.
What's the story about, making a decision to run away or the what happens after he runs away?
What’s the story about, making a decision to run away or the what happens after he runs away?
See lessNeeding to make ends meet, a recovering alcoholic's sobriety is tested when she returns to bartending at her father's tavern.
Desperate economic circumstances compel desperate actions. If the the major throughline is the struggle to remain sober while serving up her favorite addicting drug, why does it have to be at her father's tavern? It could be any tavern. But if the throughline centers around another character flaw anRead more
Desperate economic circumstances compel desperate actions. If the the major throughline is the struggle to remain sober while serving up her favorite addicting drug, why does it have to be at her father’s tavern? It could be any tavern. But if the throughline centers around another character flaw and/or skeletons in the family closet…
Who is the protagonist? What is the central subjective problem the woman has to deal with?
See lessNeeding to make ends meet, a recovering alcoholic's sobriety is tested when she returns to bartending at her father's tavern.
Nicholasandrewshalls does make a good point. However, I don't see her choice to return as an insuperable plot problem. The character of the bartender in the long running U.S. hit comedy, Cheers (1982-1993), Sam Malone, was a recovering alcoholic. It added some interesting complexity to the characterRead more
Nicholasandrewshalls does make a good point. However, I don’t see her choice to return as an insuperable plot problem. The character of the bartender in the long running U.S. hit comedy, Cheers (1982-1993), Sam Malone, was a recovering alcoholic. It added some interesting complexity to the character, created more opportunities for plot situations, but the role was written — and acted — in a way that made it credible.
So I can see her returning. It’s a weak choice, a bad choice, but isn’t it the nature of the dramatic character arc that characters make weak choices in Act 1, grow to make stronger choices later? As long as the bad choice is credibly motivated.
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