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  1. Posted: August 29, 2013In: Public

    After waking from a coma, a young girl with Amnesia searches for clues to her past while battling demonic creatures who stand in the way of her discovering her destiny.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 30, 2013 at 9:05 am

    P.S. After all, in all the super-hero franchises, the protagonists are SUPER characters because of their powers and HEROES because of how they USE them -- to rescue and help stake characters.

    P.S. After all, in all the super-hero franchises, the protagonists are SUPER characters because of their powers and HEROES because of how they USE them — to rescue and help stake characters.

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  2. Posted: August 29, 2013In: Public

    After waking from a coma, a young girl with Amnesia searches for clues to her past while battling demonic creatures who stand in the way of her discovering her destiny.

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    Added an answer on August 30, 2013 at 9:01 am

    >>There will be a human sidekick that observes her journey of self discovery. Only observe? I suggest the sidekick should be more than just an observer. Said human is or becomes a stake character. IOW: the protagonist must win the battle not only for herself but to save someone else near and dRead more

    >>There will be a human sidekick that observes her journey of self discovery.

    Only observe? I suggest the sidekick should be more than just an observer. Said human is or becomes a stake character. IOW: the protagonist must win the battle not only for herself but to save someone else near and dear, a stake character.

    After all, what are all these powers for? Just to show off? Just to use for own self-aggrandizement? Angels, are by definition, celestial agents that help and protect — the good ones, anyway. So it would be more dramatically satisfying if she MUST prevail in the supernatural, celestial dimension in order to fulfill her true nature and destiny in the long run. In the immediate context of the story, that means rescuing a stake character who is in mortal peril in the mundane world.

    fwiw.

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  3. Posted: August 29, 2013In: Public

    After waking from a coma, a young girl with Amnesia searches for clues to her past while battling demonic creatures who stand in the way of her discovering her destiny.

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    Added an answer on August 30, 2013 at 6:42 am

    Is the conflict solely in her mind? Is there a corresponding external struggle she must win?

    Is the conflict solely in her mind? Is there a corresponding external struggle she must win?

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