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  1. Posted: August 11, 2013In: Public

    Seven year old JR nearly unwishes his talking Teddy Bear, Threadbare Fred Bear, until Fred (his guardian angel in disguise) takes him on a trip through the wishing tunnel, dodging wishes coming true, until they reach The Wish Factory where they watch elves, angels and The Big Guy manifest hopes, dreams, wishes and prayers.

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    Added an answer on August 11, 2013 at 9:04 am

    >>>he story certainly is about being positive How? And once, again, who is the protagonist? What is his objective goal? What does he stand to lose (the sakes) if he fails?

    >>>he story certainly is about being positive
    How?

    And once, again, who is the protagonist? What is his objective goal? What does he stand to lose (the sakes) if he fails?

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  2. Posted: August 11, 2013In: Public

    Seven year old JR nearly unwishes his talking Teddy Bear, Threadbare Fred Bear, until Fred (his guardian angel in disguise) takes him on a trip through the wishing tunnel, dodging wishes coming true, until they reach The Wish Factory where they watch elves, angels and The Big Guy manifest hopes, dreams, wishes and prayers.

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    Added an answer on August 11, 2013 at 7:52 am

    Who is the protagonist? If it's JR, what's his objective goal? What does he want? (Unwish is a negative, not a positive act. Why does he 'unwish'-- whatever that means?) What's at stake -- what does he stand to gain if he succeeds, lose if he fails?

    Who is the protagonist? If it’s JR, what’s his objective goal? What does he want? (Unwish is a negative, not a positive act. Why does he ‘unwish’– whatever that means?)

    What’s at stake — what does he stand to gain if he succeeds, lose if he fails?

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  3. Posted: August 9, 2013In: Public

    Upon learning that suicide will forbid him entry to Heaven, a religious yet guilt-racked hitman secretly lets the public democratically determine his next target in order to righteously earn the Lord's favour and then be killed in the process.

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    Added an answer on August 11, 2013 at 2:56 am

    SDMann: Re: The Travis Bickle character The screenwriter Paul Schrader did more than create an alienated taxi driver with an urge to kill; he also gave him a redeemable quality: Travis cares enough to try to rescue the young prostitute from her pimp. That "B" story salvages an otherwise seemingly unRead more

    SDMann:
    Re: The Travis Bickle character

    The screenwriter Paul Schrader did more than create an alienated taxi driver with an urge to kill; he also gave him a redeemable quality: Travis cares enough to try to rescue the young prostitute from her pimp. That “B” story salvages an otherwise seemingly unsalvageable character.

    Have you got a redeeming “B” story for your protagonist?

    fwiw.

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