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A lowly bartender planning her upcoming marriage has her Celebrity Free Pass, the one famous person she can sleep with without any consequences from her partner, walk into her bar, creating a world of problems for herself when she accepts his advances.
Why not double the fun, double the possibilities? Have both get involved in Celebrity Free Pass flings. Double the complications ensue.
Why not double the fun, double the possibilities? Have both get involved in Celebrity Free Pass flings. Double the complications ensue.
See lessAn ailing country town convinces Kevin Costner to sing at the close of their rodeo. When an accident happens, Kevin thinks he is the 'Bodyguard'. Policeman WIlliam William an Indigenous man, worn down, angry and hungry for a transfer has to 'watch him' and find a cure before the end of the day. (PS would use a lookalike Kevin Costner)
If you're really want to twist the character, make her a thoroughly deluded... woman. Who thinks she's used to be Kevin Costner -- before a sex change operation. Or she's the reincarnation of Elvis. (Or both, depending on the time of day, her medication and her mood.)
If you’re really want to twist the character, make her a thoroughly deluded… woman. Who thinks she’s used to be Kevin Costner — before a sex change operation. Or she’s the reincarnation of Elvis. (Or both, depending on the time of day, her medication and her mood.)
See lessAfter successful neurosurgery, a monk questions his visions of a transcendent being or whether they're symptoms of mental illness.
"Successful neurosurgery" If the surgery was successful, why is he having visions? Or is the surgery successful because it eliminated his visions? The logline could benefit from clarification on that point. "questions his visions". Two issues 1] It's an inciting incident necessary perhaps, but not sRead more
“Successful neurosurgery” If the surgery was successful, why is he having visions? Or is the surgery successful because it eliminated his visions? The logline could benefit from clarification on that point.
“questions his visions”. Two issues 1] It’s an inciting incident necessary perhaps, but not sufficient to constitute a plot statement for a logline. 2] It’s an interior conflict, in his mind only, out of sight from the sight of the audience.
The conflict needs to be externalized, acted out on a movie screen. And the way to do that is use the internal doubt as an inciting incident that motivates external actions, specifically a struggle for an objective goal.
Finally, what is at stake? What does the monk stand to lose if he fails in his struggle to achieve his objective goal?
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