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  1. Posted: July 31, 2013In: Public

    A mentally challenged teen who is imprisoned because he accidentally murdered somebody falls in love with his therapist against her better judgment

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 2, 2013 at 3:42 am

    >>A mentally challenged Vague. Is he cognitively deficient or psychologically disordered? Or both? >>falls in love with his therapist against her better judgment What? He falls in love -- and it's her fault? As written, your logline blames the victim.

    >>A mentally challenged

    Vague. Is he cognitively deficient or psychologically disordered? Or both?

    >>falls in love with his therapist against her better judgment

    What? He falls in love — and it’s her fault? As written, your logline blames the victim.

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  2. Posted: July 28, 2013In: Public

    When the objects, acting in concert worldwide, start refusing to help with bad actions for no apparent reason, it becomes the hell on earth for bad people but not yet heaven for the others. Will we be able to understand what things want to teach us: a lesson in humanity?

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    Added an answer on August 2, 2013 at 1:40 am

    And BTW: I posited "plot as a conspiracy against the protagonist" as a general dramatic principle. I was repeating a statement I read in a book. I think it's a very useful notion. Your plot IS a conspiracy against your characters even if don't you conceive of it that way. You are deliberately designRead more

    And BTW:
    I posited “plot as a conspiracy against the protagonist” as a general dramatic principle. I was repeating a statement I read in a book. I think it’s a very useful notion. Your plot IS a conspiracy against your characters even if don’t you conceive of it that way. You are deliberately designing a plot to force your characters to change, act better, do things the way you think they should be done.

    If that’s not a conspiracy, I know not the meaning of the term.

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: July 28, 2013In: Public

    When the objects, acting in concert worldwide, start refusing to help with bad actions for no apparent reason, it becomes the hell on earth for bad people but not yet heaven for the others. Will we be able to understand what things want to teach us: a lesson in humanity?

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    Added an answer on August 2, 2013 at 1:35 am

    Whatever. But there needs to be a unity of action, that is, a principal character around whom to frame your narrative. Who's the lucky guy (or gal)?

    Whatever. But there needs to be a unity of action, that is, a principal character around whom to frame your narrative. Who’s the lucky guy (or gal)?

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