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A young motorcycle rider who wants to become a police detective but suddenly 5 people are killed and the killer is unknown and if he solves this case he can become a detective.
The reel world of cinema can take liberties with the real world -- but not like this premise. In the real world, the character has to join the force as a rookie cop, get the training, work and study his way up the ranks.
The reel world of cinema can take liberties with the real world — but not like this premise. In the real world, the character has to join the force as a rookie cop, get the training, work and study his way up the ranks.
See lessAn ailing country town convinces Kevin Costner to sing at the close of their rodeo. When an accident happens, Kevin thinks he is the 'Bodyguard'. Policeman WIlliam William an Indigenous man, worn down, angry and hungry for a transfer has to 'watch him' and find a cure before the end of the day. (PS would use a lookalike Kevin Costner)
The premise has a DOA casting and legal hurdle: Kevin Costner. Just because he's a public person, doesn't give someone the right to appropriate his character, his persona for a movie. You have to get a legal release to use his character, his persona. Which, if -- IF -- you can get, won't come free,Read more
The premise has a DOA casting and legal hurdle: Kevin Costner. Just because he’s a public person, doesn’t give someone the right to appropriate his character, his persona for a movie. You have to get a legal release to use his character, his persona. Which, if — IF — you can get, won’t come free, won’t come cheap, either.
See lessBen George is a shy freshman kid who's father works for NASA to support himself after his wife dies so Ben meets up with two juniors who bond with him and also help him work out his relationship with his father.
>>Ben George You don't need to name characters in a logline line. Indeed, the general rule is: don't. >>works for NASA What has that got to do with any other element in the logline? It may be part of the story, but what purpose does it serve in a logline where every word should relate anRead more
>>Ben George
You don’t need to name characters in a logline line. Indeed, the general rule is: don’t.
>>works for NASA
What has that got to do with any other element in the logline? It may be part of the story, but what purpose does it serve in a logline where every word should relate and tie together like links in chain?
>>work out his relationship with his father
Vague. And relates more to subjective issues than objective problems or goals.
What is the kid’s specific, urgent objective goal?
See lessWhat is the inciting incident?