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A mentally challenged teen who is imprisoned because he accidentally murdered somebody falls in love with his therapist against her better judgment
All the problems with the premise mentioned by the others. And what business does the daughter of the hospital administrator have being on the premises? Mental hospitals are not a zoo where just anyone can walk in and gawk at the inmates. I suggest that a more interesting premise would be a disturbeRead more
All the problems with the premise mentioned by the others. And what business does the daughter of the hospital administrator have being on the premises? Mental hospitals are not a zoo where just anyone can walk in and gawk at the inmates.
I suggest that a more interesting premise would be a disturbed teenager who falls for his therapist. And then, against her better judgment and professional training, despite the age difference, the therapist falls for the teen.
See lessWhen the objects, acting in concert worldwide, start refusing to help with bad actions for no apparent reason, it becomes the hell on earth for bad people but not yet heaven for the others. Will we be able to understand what things want to teach us: a lesson in humanity?
Jean-Marie I don't have handle on the story based on the information you've provided. However, if one considers that one definition of the the plot is a conspiracy against the protagonist, then it follows that the plot in your premise is a conspiracy against villains and criminals. So one possibilitRead more
Jean-Marie
I don’t have handle on the story based on the information you’ve provided. However, if one considers that one definition of the the plot is a conspiracy against the protagonist, then it follows that the plot in your premise is a conspiracy against villains and criminals.
So one possibility is establish your protagonist as a criminal who suddenly finds himself in a world that refuses to co-operate, refuses to enable or facilitate his criminal behavior. And, of course, there could be a supporting cast of other criminal and immoral characters.
See lessA nerdy kid from New York City moves to Oakland and tries to get the most popular girl in school to ask him out.
And struggling to get her to ask him is a wimpy, passive. That's being true to his flaw, but his struggle should be to overcome his flaw and ask her out.
And struggling to get her to ask him is a wimpy, passive. That’s being true to his flaw, but his struggle should be to overcome his flaw and ask her out.
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