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An idealistic young couple travelling by train on their honeymoon encounter a cynical elderly couple who turn out to be them in later life.
And then what?? It's an interesting situation, but the logline needs to follow through with a complete plot.? Try running it through the logline generator.
And then what?? It’s an interesting situation, but the logline needs to follow through with a complete plot.? Try running it through the logline generator.
See lessWhen the mysterious knight who slaughtered his village?returns, a distrustful werewolf reluctantly teams with a rebellious human princess to track the knight down before he starts a war between humans and fantasy creatures.
Backstory clarification please:? why did the warrior kill off his own village, turn on his own people?? That deed establishes that the knight is a bad dude, but I don't see how it foreshadows his present plan to start a war between humans and "fantasy creatures"?And how can he start a war involvingRead more
Backstory clarification please:? why did the warrior kill off his own village, turn on his own people?? That deed establishes that the knight is a bad dude, but I don’t see how it foreshadows his present plan to start a war between humans and “fantasy creatures”?
And how can he start a war involving “fantasy creatures” when by the very definition of the term, they are fanciful, imaginary — they don’t have a material existence?
And why does it matter that there is a war? What are the stakes?? Why should the princess take on the knight unless the he poses a clear and present threat to her kingdom?? It does not seem to be clearly established what — if any – direct threat the knight poses to the princess and her realm.
See lessA headstrong girl wants to change her sex to claim her inheritance. But the psychiatrist at the ? sex-change clinic claims her heart.
Bollywoodbabe,Thanks for the offer, but as a matter of practice I prefer to work with refining loglines in this manner.>>>doesn?t give the go ahead to the operation once he comes to know her reason for sex change. And that is revealed end of act 2.Hah!? That's a great end of Act 2 moment!OkRead more
Bollywoodbabe,
Thanks for the offer, but as a matter of practice I prefer to work with refining loglines in this manner.
>>>doesn?t give the go ahead to the operation once he comes to know her reason for sex change. And that is revealed end of act 2.
Hah!? That’s a great end of Act 2 moment!
Okay, so is the audience in on her real motivation from the beginning?? Or do they only find out when the shrink does?
And again, are you playing this straight or for laughs?? As drama — or comedy?? I gotta say that when I first read your logline, I had a WTF response:? this is crazy!? But the more I ponder your premise, the more I am coming around to the opinion that it would make for some hilarious crazy comedy.
One suggestion:? The logline should indicate the setting.? Which I guessed was India based upon your avatar name, but I wanted to be sure.? The premise makes absolutely no sense in my country and culture (USA).? And as this site attracts writers from around the globe, it might not make sense to many of them either. But it? would make absolute sense in a country where more traditional norms still prevail.
Anyway,? here’s? rough draft for a suggested logline as I currently understand the premise:
Outraged that her foolish brother(s) will inherit all of her father’s estate according to ancient custom, a headstrong Indian girl consults a psychiatrist to undergo a sex change operation so she can claim her share.
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Best wishes with your project.? This is definitely a film I would want to see.
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