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When a wonder drug makes sleep obsolete, a morally conflicted TV hypnotist decides to help police investigations in a new world where criminals exploit a more fragile and easily manipulated human mind. (1 Hour Crime/SciFi TV Show)
>>>I guess I see it more that these waking dreams, Recals, are a side effect of not sleeping as apposed to the drug.And that has happened in experiments where volunteers are deprived of sleep for days.? They start hallucinating; eventually their minds will automatically flip into R.E.M. modRead more
>>>I guess I see it more that these waking dreams, Recals, are a side effect of not sleeping as apposed to the drug.
And that has happened in experiments where volunteers are deprived of sleep for days.? They start hallucinating; eventually their minds will automatically flip into R.E.M. mode.? Because? R.E.M. sleep is how the brain edits the contents of short term memory, organizes and files what’s left into long term memory.
As I said earlier, I think the premise has interesting possibilities.? I suggest an alternate option might be to develop it as a film franchise.? Like the first film could be the origin story that sets up the premise and the story world, solves a dramatic question but leaves it open ended for further cases, further episodes. (Open ended in that the overarching problem of a 24/7/365 economic system that makes taking the drug a matter of Darwinian survival hasn’t been solved.)
Whatever. Best wishes with your writing.
See lessA headstrong girl wants to change her sex to claim her inheritance. But the psychiatrist at the ? sex-change clinic claims her heart.
Bollywoodbabe:Thanks for the clarification.It's an interesting idea, but I see several issues that have to be cleared up.? Like how believable is it that she could claim the inheritance after making the switch given that everyone would know she was born a girl??? And, I presume, would find the veryRead more
Bollywoodbabe:
Thanks for the clarification.
It’s an interesting idea, but I see several issues that have to be cleared up.? Like how believable is it that she could claim the inheritance after making the switch given that everyone would know she was born a girl??? And, I presume, would find the very notion of a sex-change operation (for any reason) to be anathema?? Will they recognize her new identity, hence, her claim?? Will the law?? And how believable is it that a psychiatrist would support and sign off on the operation given that she’s doing it for the wrong reason?
And is the psychiatrist male or female?
In short:? what is story really about? What is the central dramatic question of the plot?? Is it whether a woman can successfully challenge a legal system and traditional culture by getting the sex change operation?? Or is the central dramatic question:? Can a woman and her psychiatrist overcome the complications of her wanting to undergo a sex change operation and find true love?
Finally, as you tagged it as a romance, do you intend to write it straight, or for laughs, as a romantic drama, or a romantic comedy?
See lessA headstrong girl wants to change her sex to claim her inheritance. But the psychiatrist at the ? sex-change clinic claims her heart.
Why must she change her sex to get an inheritance?
Why must she change her sex to get an inheritance?
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