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  1. Posted: July 11, 2013In: Public

    Three half-siblings meet each other for the first time after their absent (and now dead) father left them millions of dollars, with one big catch.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on July 12, 2013 at 9:18 am

    Three more movies about inheritances that come with a catch: Dawg: To inherit a million dollars, an egotistical man must find all the women he's betrayed and convince them to forgive him. The Ultimate Gift: When his grandfather dies, his grandson must perform a series of tasks to get the inheritanceRead more

    Three more movies about inheritances that come with a catch:

    Dawg: To inherit a million dollars, an egotistical man must find all the women he’s betrayed and convince them to forgive him.

    The Ultimate Gift: When his grandfather dies, his grandson must perform a series of tasks to get the inheritance.

    Scavenger Hunt: Relatives must engage in a Scavenger Hunt to determine who will get the inheritance.

    So, what Richiev said. There’s nothing novel in a story about an inheritance that comes with a catch. The hook is the nature of the catch; it has to be part of the logline.

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  2. Posted: May 25, 2013In: Public

    1999. Reception lounges are dying. After six years banishment, a CBD event manager reluctantly returns to work in The Palace, his old man?s Greek reception lounge in the suburbs, on their biggest wedding ever, and he will save his family from financial ruin and shame? If his father will just let him.

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    Added an answer on July 11, 2013 at 9:44 pm

    In contemporary Greece, a playboy son and a stubborn father must put aside their longstanding feud to save their family from financial ruin and shame.

    In contemporary Greece, a playboy son and a stubborn father must put aside their longstanding feud to save their family from financial ruin and shame.

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  3. Posted: July 10, 2013In: Public

    Short Film: A frustrated white collar man, unintentionally undergo a comical journey of social scrutiny and conditioning experiences in the park, leading to his awakening/revelation about the society.

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    Added an answer on July 11, 2013 at 8:54 am

    Okay. But how about making your logline a little more specific? For example, what if he's more than a "white collar man", he's an advertising account executive or a copy writer? That is, somebody who by just his occupation a logline reader would immediately grasp is tasked with generating marketingRead more

    Okay. But how about making your logline a little more specific?

    For example, what if he’s more than a “white collar man”, he’s an advertising account executive or a copy writer? That is, somebody who by just his occupation a logline reader would immediately grasp is tasked with generating marketing ideas.

    And what if he’s struggling to generate ideas to sell a specific product? Like soap or breakfast cereal. (Extra points if the product is paradoxical or ironic to his epiphany.)

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