1. Posted: July 7, 2013In:

    When a self-serving criminal sees his war-hero father brutally arrested by a security Czar, the son fights to liberate his father and overthrow a tyrannical government.

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    The brutal arrest of his war-hero father by a tyrannical government galvanizes a I-don't-give-a-damn-about-anyone-or-anything criminal to give a damn and fight to free his father. A logline usually describes the protagonist's primary and singular objective goal. Which I take to be: free his father.Read more

    The brutal arrest of his war-hero father by a tyrannical government galvanizes a I-don’t-give-a-damn-about-anyone-or-anything criminal to give a damn and fight to free his father.

    A logline usually describes the protagonist’s primary and singular objective goal. Which I take to be: free his father. “Overthrow a tyrannical government” is either a means to that singular goal or a collateral consequence.

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  2. Posted: July 8, 2013In:

    When a woman from another planet falls down from the sky, A father who has lost his wife and son, helps the woman get back to where she came from.

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    Oh, and in E.T., getting back to the home planet is a matter of life and death. There are no such stakes in "Look Up".

    Oh, and in E.T., getting back to the home planet is a matter of life and death. There are no such stakes in “Look Up”.

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  3. Posted: July 10, 2013In:

    Short Film: A frustrated white collar man, unintentionally undergo a comical journey of social scrutiny and conditioning experiences in the park, leading to his awakening/revelation about the society.

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    How short is "short"?

    How short is “short”?

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