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  1. Posted: July 8, 2013In: Public

    When a woman from another planet falls down from the sky, A father who has lost his wife and son, helps the woman get back to where she came from.

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    Why does help her (other than simple human decency)? What's the stakes -- what does he stand to lose if he fails? What's the obstacle and/or antagonist that prevents her from getting back to her home planet?

    Why does help her (other than simple human decency)?
    What’s the stakes — what does he stand to lose if he fails?
    What’s the obstacle and/or antagonist that prevents her from getting back to her home planet?

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  2. Posted: July 6, 2013In: Public

    During the first few weeks of a zombie outbreak, a penniless college grad attempts to fund his refuge by hosting a house party, but his plans are jeopardized when a new acquaintance, turns out to be a serial killer.

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    Added an answer on July 6, 2013 at 9:22 pm

    A man provides a refuge that saves his friends from a zombie plague, but one by one they die under mysterious circumstances. One of them is a serial killer. Or: A man provides a refuge that saves his friends from a zombie plague, but one by one they die under mysterious circumstances. Their savior iRead more

    A man provides a refuge that saves his friends from a zombie plague, but one by one they die under mysterious circumstances. One of them is a serial killer.

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    A man provides a refuge that saves his friends from a zombie plague, but one by one they die under mysterious circumstances. Their savior is a serial killer.

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  3. Posted: July 6, 2013In: Public

    In the near future, a manipulative drug addict is deceived into a subconscious form of intervention–by the people who care about him the most.

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    Added an answer on July 6, 2013 at 8:54 pm

    "a subconscious form of intervention" -- vague. What does it mean? What is the purpose, the objective goal of this "subconscious form of..." whatever? What's at stake? What is so important about "in the near future"? Does the story belong to the sci-fi genre?

    “a subconscious form of intervention” — vague. What does it mean?

    What is the purpose, the objective goal of this “subconscious form of…” whatever?

    What’s at stake?

    What is so important about “in the near future”? Does the story belong to the sci-fi genre?

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