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Set amidst the transformation of Times Square from New York?s seediest neighborhood to the commercialized Disneyland it is today, when a secret from his past is unearthed, a young man?s loyalties are divided between his neighborhood boss who raised him and the grizzled ex-cop who swore to protect him.
It seems to me the 1st 19 words ("Set amidst....is today") are extraneous for the purpose of a logline. The core of the story seems to be a dilemma that a young man faces because of some secret from his past. I'm a sucker for a good dramatic dilemma -- if it's a genuine dilemma and if the stakes areRead more
It seems to me the 1st 19 words (“Set amidst….is today”) are extraneous for the purpose of a logline.
The core of the story seems to be a dilemma that a young man faces because of some secret from his past. I’m a sucker for a good dramatic dilemma — if it’s a genuine dilemma and if the stakes are high enough. But I have no idea what the stakes are in this logline. I have no idea what the “dark secret ” threatens. The young man’s one and only chance to escape his seedy environment? His very life? Or…?
And it’s not clear who is his antagonist. The local crime boss? The ex-cop? Or…?
Consequently, I’m not able to propose to suggest an alternative logline.
fwiw
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What kbfilmworks said. Are the assassins really the good guys going after the bad? Or the bad guys going after the worse? Or the bad guys targeting good guys? Whatever, it's a promising premise that's got me hooked.
What kbfilmworks said. Are the assassins really the good guys going after the bad? Or the bad guys going after the worse? Or the bad guys targeting good guys?
Whatever, it’s a promising premise that’s got me hooked.
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Wrongly sentenced to death for his wife's murder, a doctor escapes custody must find the real killer before he is recaptured by a relentless FBI agent.
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