1. Posted: June 12, 2013In:

    In a world where technology exists to enter the human mind through dream invasion, a highly skilled thief is given a final chance at redemption which involves executing his toughest job to date: Inception.

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    Beta version 2.0 of the logline: A "psycho-thief" who specializes in stealing secrets buried of the mind must reverse engineer his m.o. and plant a secret in order to overcome the secret that haunts his own tormented mind.

    Beta version 2.0 of the logline:

    A “psycho-thief” who specializes in stealing secrets buried of the mind must reverse engineer his m.o. and plant a secret in order to overcome the secret that haunts his own tormented mind.

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  2. Posted: June 14, 2013In:

    Brought together in the shadow of teleportation and world faith, neither Rupert nor Levi thought to save humanity; one must, before the other does.

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    What Richiev said. And why must one save humanity before the other? Why can't they can't do it together? And why do they have to save the world at all? What's the threat?

    What Richiev said.

    And why must one save humanity before the other? Why can’t they can’t do it together?

    And why do they have to save the world at all? What’s the threat?

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  3. Posted: June 13, 2013In:

    When a spoiled rich law student discovers one of his classmates is a cat burglar, she offers to set him up with his long-time crush in exchange for his silence.

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    What Tony Edward said. The hook is the idea of a law student as cat burglar, not the hook up with a crush. Who cares what happens on the guy's date with the girl he has a crush on? Tell me more about the cat burglar.

    What Tony Edward said.

    The hook is the idea of a law student as cat burglar, not the hook up with a crush. Who cares what happens on the guy’s date with the girl he has a crush on? Tell me more about the cat burglar.

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