1. Posted: June 3, 2013In:

    Clashing husband-and-wife inventors of a new process to design life-saving drugs need to settle their differences in time to fight off a global corporation using espionage tactics to bury an invention that will save millions of lives.

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    Jean-Marie: Not wishing to hijack the thread of this logline to another story, may I suggest you post a logline for "The Birds" in the "Classics" section of this website? If you are so inclined, I will be happy to respond there.

    Jean-Marie:

    Not wishing to hijack the thread of this logline to another story, may I suggest you post a logline for “The Birds” in the “Classics” section of this website? If you are so inclined, I will be happy to respond there.

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  2. Posted: June 3, 2013In:

    After finding out he has a month left to live, high school junior Felix Chester focuses all of his time and energy on one goal: losing his virginity to his dream girl.

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    How about punting it back to the author? It's not our logline, not our problem.

    How about punting it back to the author? It’s not our logline, not our problem.

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  3. Posted: June 3, 2013In:

    After finding out he has a month left to live, high school junior Felix Chester focuses all of his time and energy on one goal: losing his virginity to his dream girl.

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    Jean-Marie Well-observed. The logline is sexist, classic male chauvinism. The girl is portrayed as nothing but a fantasy sex symbol. (One would like to assume the character arc is that the kid comes to see her as a real person, but that's nowhere suggested in the logline.)

    Jean-Marie
    Well-observed. The logline is sexist, classic male chauvinism. The girl is portrayed as nothing but a fantasy sex symbol. (One would like to assume the character arc is that the kid comes to see her as a real person, but that’s nowhere suggested in the logline.)

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