1. Posted: June 3, 2013In:

    Clashing husband-and-wife inventors of a new process to design life-saving drugs need to settle their differences in time to fight off a global corporation using espionage tactics to bury an invention that will save millions of lives.

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    >>a strong beginning may please a reader but a great ending pleases the viewers. Amen! And that is no not a trivial point. Script readers are the gatekeepers and in order to get our stories past them to the people who have the real power (and money) to green light a script, we must razzle-dazzRead more

    >>a strong beginning may please a reader but a great ending pleases the viewers.

    Amen! And that is no not a trivial point.

    Script readers are the gatekeepers and in order to get our stories past them to the people who have the real power (and money) to green light a script, we must razzle-dazzle them in the first 1st Act. (First impressions– the 1st 10 pages — are everything,/u>.)

    And to sell at the box-office the story has to deliver a mesmerizing 3rd Act.

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  2. Posted: June 4, 2013In:

    An egotistical detective fights to save his reputation when a series of religious killings threaten to show the community his true colours.

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    Oh, then the logline ought to say so.

    Oh, then the logline ought to say so.

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  3. Posted: June 3, 2013

    Thwarted at every attempt to win over the girl of his dreams, an awkward boy (8) has to overcome his deepest fear to draw her into a magical world.

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    Another instance of a guy drawing a "dream girl" into his "magical world" rather then meeting her as a real person in the real world. Another male chauvinist, sexist fantasy.

    Another instance of a guy drawing a “dream girl” into his “magical world” rather then meeting her as a real person in the real world.

    Another male chauvinist, sexist fantasy.

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