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A man faces an unimaginable crisis when he discovers his new girlfriend –the daughter of a Voodoo queen– is a zombie.
Or: A guy's dream girl turns into his worst nightmare -- a zombie.
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After he steals a suitcase full of 'dirty' money, a penniless young writer struggles to escape from a street enforcer sworn to kill himself if he fails to recover the money and punish the writer.
Another good polish by Richiev, but I would keep in "punish the writer". It raises the stakes. In fact, I prefer the previous wording of "death" rather rather than "punish", particularly if the writer actually faces death. It's explicit and it raises the stakes even more.
Another good polish by Richiev, but I would keep in “punish the writer”. It raises the stakes.
In fact, I prefer the previous wording of “death” rather rather than “punish”, particularly if the writer actually faces death. It’s explicit and it raises the stakes even more.
See lessAn astrophysicist embarks on secret mission to create a new planet, hoping to end a global war before an enemy tribe turns his people against their own.
>> early drafts of Star Wars are a sprawling mess... if you haven?t read them I?d strongly recommend it--they seem way too focused on the sci-fi elements as opposed the final film?s story, Yep. Second the emotion. Well, worth studying. And Pixar's motto: the story comes first. Only after the sRead more
>> early drafts of Star Wars are a sprawling mess… if you haven?t read them I?d strongly recommend it–they seem way too focused on the sci-fi elements as opposed the final film?s story,
Yep. Second the emotion. Well, worth studying.
And Pixar’s motto: the story comes first. Only after the story is worked out do they do they apply the CGI eye candy.
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