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  1. Posted: May 22, 2013In: Public

    After accidentally discovering a superhero?s secret identity, a young psychiatrist is coerced into treating the various mental disorders of a group of eccentric crime-fighters.

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    Added an answer on May 23, 2013 at 6:37 am

    Clarification: what's the genre? Super hero or a hybrid Super hero/comedy?

    Clarification: what’s the genre? Super hero or a hybrid Super hero/comedy?

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  2. Posted: May 21, 2013In: Public

    In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.

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    Added an answer on May 23, 2013 at 6:27 am

    >>I feel like things are getting a bit jumbled Yes. >>The designated romantic interest? is actually the crime boss. You mean the nothos partner has a romantic interest for the crime boss? Because you say, the boss is male. Or are you going for a gay subtext between the protagonist and thRead more

    >>I feel like things are getting a bit jumbled

    Yes.

    >>The designated romantic interest? is actually the crime boss.

    You mean the nothos partner has a romantic interest for the crime boss? Because you say, the boss is male. Or are you going for a gay subtext between the protagonist and the antagonist?

    >> I didn?t really have a definite stakes in mind when I wrote the first logline.

    Upon reading the 1st iteration of your logline, I imagined the nothos to be more than a loathsome nuisance. I could see them as an invasive, competitive species. Just as we, Homo sapiens, were a competitive species vis-a-vis Homo Neanderthal — and we won the Darwin games.

    Ergo, the stakes are the survival of our species.

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  3. Posted: May 22, 2013In: Public

    After accidentally discovering a superhero?s secret identity, a young psychiatrist is coerced into treating the various mental disorders of a group of eccentric crime-fighters.

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    Added an answer on May 23, 2013 at 4:07 am

    Put it that way, and you got something that could work as a "B" story. Shades and shadows the Jungian anima! Who is her inner ally. Now that is more interesting all than standard issue, formulaic bodacioius bling-bling.

    Put it that way, and you got something that could work as a “B” story. Shades and shadows the Jungian anima! Who is her inner ally. Now that is more interesting all than standard issue, formulaic bodacioius bling-bling.

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