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  1. Posted: May 21, 2013In: Public

    In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.

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    Added an answer on May 23, 2013 at 1:13 am

    How about: In order to combat a contagion of mutant humans that threaten the survival of the human race, a federal agent must team up with one of their own, a female mutant. 1] It slips in the "B" story. 2] It's got an ironical twist. The agent must ally with a member of the other side. (How much irRead more

    How about:

    In order to combat a contagion of mutant humans that threaten the survival of the human race, a federal agent must team up with one of their own, a female mutant.

    1] It slips in the “B” story.
    2] It’s got an ironical twist. The agent must ally with a member of the other side. (How much irony, now much of a twist is there in going up against the charismatic mutant boss?)

    You can work in the games of lies and seduction with the willy boss, her ulterior goal of winning her own independence, yada-yada into the pitch.

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  2. Posted: May 20, 2013In: Public

    A murdered chess champion challenges heaven to save her brother from becoming her killer?s next victim.

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    Added an answer on May 22, 2013 at 11:37 pm

    Why would "heaven" accept the challenge? Wouldn't god's point of view be that heaven is the ultimate grand prize. So if some one on earth is murdered -- well, doesn't that just expedite their arrival at the best of all possible places to be? It seems to me stories like this only work if the newly arRead more

    Why would “heaven” accept the challenge? Wouldn’t god’s point of view be that heaven is the ultimate grand prize. So if some one on earth is murdered — well, doesn’t that just expedite their arrival at the best of all possible places to be?

    It seems to me stories like this only work if the newly arrived has to finish business on unheavenly earth of spiritual import, right a wrong, get one last chance to learn an important life lesson.

    But then I’ve been assigned to the fast lane to hell, so what do I know?

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  3. Posted: May 21, 2013In: Public

    When Sam Blake, a successful hitman, discovers he has a fatal disease he vows to never kill an innocent person again, but the only way a hitman retires is to sign The Agenda, a list of targets, and compete against other hitmen to see who can rack up the most kills…so Sam decides to eliminate the competition.

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    Added an answer on May 22, 2013 at 11:17 pm

    My point was why does he have to partake of "the Agenda" when he's a dead man walking? Whatever. >>A threat to his family? His kid? That might work. A la "Breaking Bad". After diagnosed with almost certainly fatal lung cancer, a milquetoast chemistry teacher decides to cook meth to provide forRead more

    My point was why does he have to partake of “the Agenda” when he’s a dead man walking?

    Whatever.

    >>A threat to his family? His kid?

    That might work. A la “Breaking Bad”. After diagnosed with almost certainly fatal lung cancer, a milquetoast chemistry teacher decides to cook meth to provide for his family after his death.

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