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  1. Posted: May 22, 2013In: Public

    An astrophysicist embarks on secret mission to create a new planet, hoping to end a global war before an enemy tribe turns his people against their own.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on May 22, 2013 at 1:18 pm

    What Richiev said. Incongruent causality and unclear phrasing.

    What Richiev said. Incongruent causality and unclear phrasing.

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  2. Posted: May 21, 2013In: Public

    In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.

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    Added an answer on May 22, 2013 at 1:14 pm

    Until I inquired, in all of your elaborations of your concept, you said zip, nada about female roles or storylines. And yet a concept's appeal to key demographics (like women) is a primary consideration in getting a green light for a series. Just saying.

    Until I inquired, in all of your elaborations of your concept, you said zip, nada about female roles or storylines. And yet a concept’s appeal to key demographics (like women) is a primary consideration in getting a green light for a series.

    Just saying.

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  3. Posted: May 21, 2013In: Public

    In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.

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    Added an answer on May 22, 2013 at 11:55 am

    >> The character is also male, as is the agent. However, I don?t see any convenient way to include >>that?or really any need to? Do you have a running "B" story character? (IOW: what is there in the concept that appeals to women?)

    >> The character is also male, as is the agent. However, I don?t see any convenient way to include >>that?or really any need to?

    Do you have a running “B” story character? (IOW: what is there in the concept that appeals to women?)

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