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In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.
Is the "half-human" different from the "nothos" Is the "half-human" male or female?
Is the “half-human” different from the “nothos”
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In a world where a new species of human suffers discrimination and containment, a young and erratic Control Officer for the Registry meets a sadistic yet charming bi-species man and builds a partnership that threatens to expose the lies at the foundation of the organization?s operations.
Have you written a pilot script? If so, how many inches of expository dialogue is required to explain this to a viewing audience? Is the half-human crime boss a nothos? Suggestion: lose "Registry" in the logline, substitute it with a generic term like "International Organization. Or define it. My miRead more
Have you written a pilot script? If so, how many inches of expository dialogue is required to explain this to a viewing audience?
Is the half-human crime boss a nothos?
Suggestion: lose “Registry” in the logline, substitute it with a generic term like “International Organization. Or define it. My mind keeps tripping over it, wanting to know what the heck is a “Registry”? (If you think I’m too damn dense to figure out the obvious , you’re right — and so will most of the people you’re pitching your concept too.)
>>Crime drama meets mythology
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When Sam Blake, a successful hitman, discovers he has a fatal disease he vows to never kill an innocent person again, but the only way a hitman retires is to sign The Agenda, a list of targets, and compete against other hitmen to see who can rack up the most kills…so Sam decides to eliminate the competition.
Richiev's version is more concise, but I still don't get the causal logic of the plot. The hitman takes a vow to kill -- and the way he keeps the vow is to... break it and go on another killing spree (I know, his targets are hitmen -- but the vow makes no distinctions, no exceptions.) Furthermore, iRead more
Richiev’s version is more concise, but I still don’t get the causal logic of the plot.
The hitman takes a vow to kill — and the way he keeps the vow is to… break it and go on another killing spree (I know, his targets are hitmen — but the vow makes no distinctions, no exceptions.)
Furthermore, if he has a fatal disease, he’s going be ‘retired’ (die) anyway so what difference does it make to him whether he plays along with the “Agenda” or not? He’s a dead man walking.
I have no problem with him breaking his vow, going out in one last blast against other hitmen, but I just want good reason. And I don’t see it in the logline.
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