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  1. Posted: May 17, 2013In: Public

    (Comedy) After the death of his wife (Mell),the oldest outlaw in a notorious biker gang decides to convert his bandits into neighborhood watch members, Whilst his enemies raise the price on his head.

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    Added an answer on May 17, 2013 at 1:02 pm

    Correction: "...The king died, and then the queen died of grief is a plot."

    Correction: “…The king died, and then the queen died of grief is a plot.”

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  2. Posted: May 17, 2013In: Public

    (Comedy) After the death of his wife (Mell),the oldest outlaw in a notorious biker gang decides to convert his bandits into neighborhood watch members, Whilst his enemies raise the price on his head.

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    Added an answer on May 17, 2013 at 1:00 pm

    I'm scratching my head. What is the causal link between the death of wife and the decision to turn his biker gang into a neighborhood watch team? Is he doing it out of guilt? Grief? Or is just a coincidence? A logline is about the plot. And E.M. Forster formulated the essential nature of a plot thisRead more

    I’m scratching my head. What is the causal link between the death of wife and the decision to turn his biker gang into a neighborhood watch team? Is he doing it out of guilt? Grief? Or is just a coincidence?

    A logline is about the plot. And E.M. Forster formulated the essential nature of a plot this way: “The king died and then the queen died is a story. The king died, and then queen died of grief is a plot.” (“Aspect of the Novel”).

    I see a story in the logline, but not a plot. The relationship between the wife’s death and the forming of a neighborhood watch team seems coincidental instead of causal. What’s the emotional trigger between her death and the biker’s decision?

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  3. Posted: May 15, 2013In: Public

    "An 86 year old man relives his past lives through hypnotic regression, but in one fateful session, a blurry vision shows him his possible next life and that his current one is about to end soon and the strange man from an unknown agency has to make the toughest moral decision."

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    Added an answer on May 16, 2013 at 1:15 pm

    BTW: I make an extra effort to find long loglines, lest my own preference for short loglines skews the data. So I think my sample is representative.

    BTW: I make an extra effort to find long loglines, lest my own preference for short loglines skews the data. So I think my sample is representative.

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