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  1. Posted: May 15, 2013In: Public

    "An 86 year old man relives his past lives through hypnotic regression, but in one fateful session, a blurry vision shows him his possible next life and that his current one is about to end soon and the strange man from an unknown agency has to make the toughest moral decision."

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    Added an answer on May 16, 2013 at 12:40 pm

    The hyperlink Tor Dollhouse posted to the Village Voice article is the god's-honest-bitter truth about the biz. >> but putting it into rigid rules, especially something only a few lines long is kind of weird. I'm not a slave to the one sentence rule as inviolable as long as the sentences are lRead more

    The hyperlink Tor Dollhouse posted to the Village Voice article is the god’s-honest-bitter truth about the biz.

    >> but putting it into rigid rules, especially something only a few lines long is kind of weird.

    I’m not a slave to the one sentence rule as inviolable as long as the sentences are logically/dramatically linked. Nor a believer that there is one standard formulation for a logline )”When W happens, Y must X [before or else] Z”).

    But a 51 word logline for “Temporal Insanity” is the kiss of death in terms of getting Hollyweird suits to read the logline, let alone the script. Being a data wonk, I have been compiling and studying a list of loglines for movies that actually got produced. Of the 412 loglines collected so far, the average word length is 23 words. 67.1% of the 412 loglines are 25 words or less. The longest logline is 39 words.

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  2. Posted: May 15, 2013In: Public

    Desperate for his father?s approval, a conceited journalist takes a job at his small town newspaper. But when he discovers a drug scandal brewing within the local football club, he pursues the story even though it will implicate his athlete brother.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on May 16, 2013 at 12:02 pm

    >> I need to stress the desire for fatherly affection is what prompts him to throw his brother under the bus, so to speak Now I'm really confused. The father would be proud to see his journalist son throw the athletic son under the bus?

    >> I need to stress the desire for fatherly affection is what prompts him to throw his brother under the bus, so to speak

    Now I’m really confused. The father would be proud to see his journalist son throw the athletic son under the bus?

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  3. Posted: May 15, 2013In: Public

    Unfaithful man tries to enamor again his wife, who loses her memory in an accident while driving to the divorce case.

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    Added an answer on May 16, 2013 at 3:55 am

    Richiev: Another good polish. ifrost: Interesting premise.

    Richiev:
    Another good polish.

    ifrost:
    Interesting premise.

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