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  1. Posted: May 14, 2013In: Public

    Retired movie people living in a once-grand hotel, fight the wrecking ball to save their home and earn a new lease on life.

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    Added an answer on May 15, 2013 at 10:10 am

    >>Even in an ensemble piece, there is usually one character whose journey signifies both the start and the end of the story Great point by nicholasandrewhalls. The Iliad, written a few thousand years before I was born, has a cast of thousands. But Aristotle in The Poetics sings its praises becRead more

    >>Even in an ensemble piece, there is usually one character whose journey signifies both the start and the end of the story

    Great point by nicholasandrewhalls. The Iliad, written a few thousand years before I was born, has a cast of thousands. But Aristotle in The Poetics sings its praises because the sprawling epic focuses on one character above all, Achilles. His story thread provides the unity of the plot.

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  2. Posted: May 14, 2013In: Public

    Retired movie people living in a once-grand hotel, fight the wrecking ball to save their home and earn a new lease on life.

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    Added an answer on May 15, 2013 at 8:59 am

    Good polish by Richeiv. But I do have a concern about the original premise: If the antagonist is that greedy, and that burdened with money problems, why would he settle for converting the property to a paltry parking lot? It seems to me he must want to leverage the property for maximum return--likeRead more

    Good polish by Richeiv.

    But I do have a concern about the original premise:

    If the antagonist is that greedy, and that burdened with money problems, why would he settle for converting the property to a paltry parking lot?

    It seems to me he must want to leverage the property for maximum return–like exclusive high rise apartments or condos. Suppose the hotel sits on a lot that has suddenly become the hottest property in a re-gentrified neighborhood, the last big lot of its size for real estate development in town.

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  3. Posted: May 13, 2013In: Public

    A female prison guard in the future, where prisoners are rehabilitated with virtual reality, discovers a conspiracy that puts her loyalty into question.

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    Added an answer on May 13, 2013 at 11:25 pm

    In the future when prisoners are rehabilitated with virtual reality, a [character flawed?] female guard discovers a [conspiracy to do what? Need something more specific] that puts her [what's at stake? Only her loyalty, not her life?] in jeopardy.

    In the future when prisoners are rehabilitated with virtual reality, a [character flawed?] female guard discovers a [conspiracy to do what? Need something more specific] that puts her [what’s at stake? Only her loyalty, not her life?] in jeopardy.

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