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  1. Posted: May 11, 2013In: Public

    When a loving man lets his wife be detained in a mental hospital because she keeps seeing their dead son, he starts seeing the boy himself. After a long mental struggle he finally accepts his wife wasn’t mentally ill after all and he lets her back in only to find out she isn’t his wife anymore, but possessed by a demon which already took their son in the past. If he really loves her, he has to kill her. (just as she did with their son in the past)

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    Added an answer on May 13, 2013 at 12:29 am

    When a compassionate psychiatrist realizes his mentally ill wife is demon possessed, he must find a way to exorcise her before she kills him. Then build up to the 3rd act dilemma of kill the one he loves -- or be killed. Or pull of a 3rd Act Discovery-Reveal a la "The Sixth Sense" as Richiev suggestRead more

    When a compassionate psychiatrist realizes his mentally ill wife is demon possessed, he must find a way to exorcise her before she kills him.

    Then build up to the 3rd act dilemma of kill the one he loves — or be killed.

    Or pull of a 3rd Act Discovery-Reveal a la “The Sixth Sense” as Richiev suggested. Whatever. Depends on what you see as central to your theme: the delusion or the dilemma.

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  2. Posted: May 9, 2013In: Public

    A greedy madam use the power of voodoo to force young girls into prostitution, till the day when one of them unexpectedly find a way for fight against her.

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    Added an answer on May 10, 2013 at 6:27 am

    Who is the protagonist? The madam or the prostitute who finds a way to fight back? If the latter, I suggest reframing the logline around her.

    Who is the protagonist? The madam or the prostitute who finds a way to fight back?

    If the latter, I suggest reframing the logline around her.

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  3. Posted: May 10, 2013In: Public

    1095. Godfrey of Bouillon has been assigned by the pope to do the greatest task of his life.. Lead the Crusade to Jerusalum. 1097. Godfrey leads his men on a march from Costantinople (istanbul) to Nicaea. Godfrey attacks the City to the east while the other armies attack the south. Bouillon leaves Nicaea. Bouillons and Raymounds forces then advanced to Dorylaeum. Raymound army goes to camp but are attacked by turkish soldier. His army is slaughtered. Midday Godfrey sends 50 knights to rienforce Bohemund. The Battle continues until the turkish knights retreated. 1099. 2100 of the Crusaders went to fight the Mighty 20,000 turkish soldiers

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    Added an answer on May 10, 2013 at 4:03 am

    Not a logline. Enough said.

    Not a logline. Enough said.

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