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A week before Christmas terrorists invade the North Pole and take Santa hostage, and the only cop that can save him hates Christmas more than Ebenezer Scrooge.
Love it! One minor question: Does it have to be a cop? Can't be a special agent (CIA, FBI)? Or a member of special forces? (Like the Seals who took out bin Laden)
Love it!
One minor question: Does it have to be a cop? Can’t be a special agent (CIA, FBI)? Or a member of special forces? (Like the Seals who took out bin Laden)
See lessSet against the backdrop of rainy Portland, Oregon, a young man finds himself falling in love for the first time – only to receive a letter from his future self, warning him of impending heartbreak.
Cameron, Sorry to come down so hard in previous 2 posts. FWIW: If I didn't find something intriguing about your premise, I wouldn't bother responding. And I do: I think your logline contains the nucleus for an interesting story. But I also think it needs polishing and focusing. About "backdrop of raRead more
Cameron,
Sorry to come down so hard in previous 2 posts. FWIW: If I didn’t find something intriguing about your premise, I wouldn’t bother responding. And I do: I think your logline contains the nucleus for an interesting story. But I also think it needs polishing and focusing.
About “backdrop of rainy Portland”: Okay, it ties in with the title. But does nucleus of the story hinge on the location of Portland?
If your going for local funding and production of the story, then the logline makes sense . But if you’re going for a wider potential group of investors and talent, then I suggest a rethink. (Which is not to say the story can’t be located in Portland. It most certainly can. My remarks are only in reference to the logline.)
See lessSet against the backdrop of rainy Portland, Oregon, a young man finds himself falling in love for the first time – only to receive a letter from his future self, warning him of impending heartbreak.
And furtherless, what's at stake? Is the protagonist going to have his naive heart broken -- but that's life. Live and learn; life goes on? (small stakes). Or is his first love going to have immense consequences that will destory his chances for love, happiness, a successful career, financial securiRead more
And furtherless, what’s at stake?
Is the protagonist going to have his naive heart broken — but that’s life. Live and learn; life goes on? (small stakes).
Or is his first love going to have immense consequences that will destory his chances for love, happiness, a successful career, financial security for the rest of his life — the whole enchilada? (big stakes)
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