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  1. Posted: May 2, 2013In: Public

    When a happily married woman who hooks on the side sleeps with her husbands new boss, she must convince him to stay silent or her life will be ruined.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on May 5, 2013 at 7:51 am

    "Happily married " and "who hooks on the side" seem incongruous. That she's seeking "extra spice" outside her marriage implies discontent (whether she acknowledges it or not) -- she's not getting enough at home. And if she is seeking "extra spice", a woman can get plenty of that with affairs and oneRead more

    “Happily married ” and “who hooks on the side” seem incongruous.

    That she’s seeking “extra spice” outside her marriage implies discontent (whether she acknowledges it or not) — she’s not getting enough at home.

    And if she is seeking “extra spice”, a woman can get plenty of that with affairs and one night stands without having to be a prostitute, selling her services at airports (which, in any case, is a lousy location; a better location for the “spice” trade is bars at airport hotels.)

    I’d pass your explanation for her behavior by some women, see if they buy the feminine psychology your selling.

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  2. Posted: May 2, 2013In: Public

    A man who blacks out for seven hours each night has feared the day when his two lives collide, and when they do, the lives of millions hang in the balance.

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    Added an answer on May 4, 2013 at 6:01 am

    What's the difference between "blacks out for seven hours each night " and sleep?

    What’s the difference between “blacks out for seven hours each night ” and sleep?

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  3. Posted: May 3, 2013In: Public

    When a suitcase full of 'dirty money' falls from a balcony along with a Japanese businessman, a penniless young Londoner steals the case, a Yakuza enforcer is sent to track him down and an epic battle begins on the streets of East London.

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    Added an answer on May 3, 2013 at 6:57 am

    kbfilmworks, In view of your many iterations of the concept, what's the itch you're trying to scratch? What is the one essential aspect of the concept that hooks--and keeps hooking -- your interest, that you are trying to distill and bottle in the logline?

    kbfilmworks,

    In view of your many iterations of the concept, what’s the itch you’re trying to scratch?

    What is the one essential aspect of the concept that hooks–and keeps hooking — your interest, that you are trying to distill and bottle in the logline?

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