1. Posted: July 2, 2019In:

    A shy guy tries to seduce a snobby girl during an awkward pre-arranged mating session between their chihuahua dogs. COMEDY SHORT

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    >>>A young man must deal How, specifically?? His dog obviously has an objective goal.? What becomes his objective goal in response to that of his dog?

    >>>A young man must deal

    How, specifically?? His dog obviously has an objective goal.? What becomes his objective goal in response to that of his dog?

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  2. Posted: July 3, 2019In:

    While on a routine mission, the angel of death awakens the wrath of the apocalypse and must travel through hell to find his redemption.

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    I don't understand what the story is. Technically, the word "apocalypse" refers to an event in Bible prophesy not a person or conscious entity. So how can it be awakened?? What "sin" has the angel of death committed that it needs redemption?? Why does it matter?? Why does the road to redemption leadRead more

    I don’t understand what the story is. Technically, the word “apocalypse” refers to an event in Bible prophesy not a person or conscious entity. So how can it be awakened?? What “sin” has the angel of death committed that it needs redemption?? Why does it matter?? Why does the road to redemption lead through hell?? And If the angel of death doesn’t obtain redemption, what are the consequences?? Does that mean the end of death??

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  3. Posted: July 1, 2019In: ,

    A woman struggles to hike 1100 miles of the Pacific Crest Trail alone as her recovery program from drug abuse and family tragedy.

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    mikepedley85,I take your point about the wording, but I don't think her decision was impulsive.? She starts her hike staggering under a heavy backpack.? Heavy because she took some time to research and purchase items -- too much time, perhaps .? (The heavy backpack is a visual metaphor for the heavyRead more

    mikepedley85,

    I take your point about the wording, but I don’t think her decision was impulsive.? She starts her hike staggering under a heavy backpack.? Heavy because she took some time to research and purchase items — too much time, perhaps .? (The heavy backpack is a visual metaphor for the heavy psychological burden she’s carrying.)? Also, she had the foresight to make arrangements for care packages to be mailed at intervals to various pickup points.

    The way the movie unfolds,? the “syuzhet” , there’s no definitive inciting incident.? She just commences her journey.? Only through the accumulation of backstory moments through flashbacks do we flesh out the “fabula” with the backstory, the personal tragedy and drug abuse problems that preceded and motivated the trek.

    >> is the story known well enough? in the US to user her name.

    The movie is an adaptation of a best-selling book by Cheryl Strayed.? But I think her feat is more widely known than her person.

    Anyway, maybe as an alternate version:

    With no hiking experience or companionship, a woman recovering from drug abuse and family tragedy struggles to hike 1100 miles of the Pacific Crest Trail.

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