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A General in the Olympian Order exacts his vengeance against the corrupt goddess queen of Olympus who killed his family and enslaved him to ten fatal labors.
The logline has echoes of the story of Hercules in Greek mythology.? I think that corruption is a non issue.? The Olympian gods were all too human in their behavior.? They were not expected to live up to some some platonic ideal of justice and fairness. And most of them didn't.Hera drove Hercules maRead more
The logline has echoes of the story of Hercules in Greek mythology.? I think that corruption is a non issue.? The Olympian gods were all too human in their behavior.? They were not expected to live up to some some platonic ideal of justice and fairness. And most of them didn’t.
Hera drove Hercules mad so that he killed his wife and children? His 10 (or 12 depending on the source) labors were his penance.? Why did Hera drive Hercules mad?? Because Hercules’ father was her husband Zeus; he was the offspring of one of his many, many affairs. Zeus, the top honcho on Mt. Olympus, was a serial rapist and adulterer.
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See lessA grieving student staying alone on a university campus over the Christmas holidays becomes involved in a brutal fight for his life, after accidentally tuning into a nearby heist using a handheld police scanner.
A logline should be a concise statement of the plot. Period.? Full stop.And? I don't detect a hook in your logline.? So as it reads, I'm not interested in further details.Puzzlement should not be construed as curiosity.Just saying.?
A logline should be a concise statement of the plot. Period.? Full stop.
And? I don’t detect a hook in your logline.? So as it reads, I’m not interested in further details.
Puzzlement should not be construed as curiosity.
Just saying.
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See lessWhen a social phobic former photographer falls in love with the number one tennis star in the world, he must overcome his anxieties in order to get back his job and be with her.
>>>the pictures he took (hanging at his home)Suggest instead:? Instagram, Flickr, etc. (If the pictures are only hanging in his home, and he only goes out at night -- how will she ever know about them, even know he exists?)So, she's going to rescue him.? What does she get in return?? What'sRead more
>>>the pictures he took (hanging at his home)
Suggest instead:? Instagram, Flickr, etc. (If the pictures are only hanging in his home, and he only goes out at night — how will she ever know about them, even know he exists?)
So, she’s going to rescue him.? What does she get in return?? What’s in the relationship for her?? Where’s the reciprocity?? What can he do for her that she needs?
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