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After losing her arm in a car accident, a prodigious but reckless chef reconciles with her ill father, who encourages her to seek redemption and forgiveness.
I agree with mikepdley85.? Introduce her at the top of her game, the peak of her career.? And arrogant and difficult to work with.? She's know how to cook, but not how deal with mere humans who? "crippled" by an inability to perform up to her standards. (Thus establishing the contrast? for the 3rd ARead more
I agree with mikepdley85.? Introduce her at the top of her game, the peak of her career.? And arrogant and difficult to work with.? She’s know how to cook, but not how deal with mere humans who? “crippled” by an inability to perform up to her standards. (Thus establishing the contrast? for the 3rd Act redemptive solution.)
And then because of reckless hubris…
About the 3rd Act:? It seems to me that it would be a more dramatically effective reconciliation if she’s not the beneficiary of his will.? Because the father doesn’t die? Rather he remains alive and? stakes her.? He demonstrates his love for her and his faith in her talent by cashing out the last of his IRA savings.? But that it isn’t enough. for her to start anew.? So he mortgages his home.? In the closing scene, she serves him his favorite dish and he raises a toast to her recovery and their reconciliation.? (Bringing closure to a backstory issue:? he’s never dined in one of her restaurants before.)
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See lessAfter losing her arm in a car accident, a prodigious but reckless chef reconciles with her ill father, who encourages her to seek redemption and forgiveness.
You've got an interesting 1st Act ,? the accident and loss that triggers her crisis.? And I like the 3rd Act resolution. But loglines are not about 3rd Acts.? Loglines should never contain a spoiler, how the protagonist solves her dramatic problem.? So that leaves the 2nd Act , fully half the film,Read more
You’ve got an interesting 1st Act ,? the accident and loss that triggers her crisis.? And I like the 3rd Act resolution.
But loglines are not about 3rd Acts.? Loglines should never contain a spoiler, how the protagonist solves her dramatic problem.? So that leaves the 2nd Act , fully half the film, where “she hits rock bottom”.? Well, how exciting? or interesting will that be to watch?? ?What distinguishes her descent to a “rock bottom” from all the other descents in all the other films about characters facing traumatic adversity?
See lessIn a time of great tension between fantastical creature and men, a werewolf warrior, trying to follow in his ancestors’ footsteps, reluctantly teams up with a human princess to track down the mysterious knight who slaughtered the warrior’s village when he was a child.
As Richiev asked.? Why now?? What's the inciting incident that triggers his intention to get revenge now? And what skin does the princess have in the game?? Why would she want to partner up with an alien species, a werewolf?? What's in it for her? Seems to me she would be even more reluctant to partRead more
As Richiev asked.? Why now?? What’s the inciting incident that triggers his intention to get revenge now?
And what skin does the princess have in the game?? Why would she want to partner up with an alien species, a werewolf?? What’s in it for her? Seems to me she would be even more reluctant to partner up with him than he with her.
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