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When he?s a contestant on Blind Date, a hopeless romantic bucks the trend and asks the important questions to find out who is really behind each door
Given the genre, what's the seemingly insurmountable obstacle or wedge issue?? I think it ought to at least be implicit in the logline.? And I don't see one.Also, is he a? steadfast character?? I? mean he already seems to be doing the right thing.? So I don't see the potential for his having a charaRead more
Given the genre, what’s the seemingly insurmountable obstacle or wedge issue?? I think it ought to at least be implicit in the logline.? And I don’t see one.
Also, is he a? steadfast character?? I? mean he already seems to be doing the right thing.? So I don’t see the potential for his having a character arc? — unless he flips from a good guy to a bad one. Not that he can’t be steadfast.? But if he is, then some other character will need to (eventually) flip.
See lessA wallflower decides to come off the wall and make the world her stage.
There seems to be an interesting story here, but I'm not sure what that story is yet.? Alas, this more suited for a tagline than a logline.? What's the difference between the two?? A tagline is targeted to movie viewers.? A logline is targeted to movie makers.? ? And movie makers are looking for speRead more
There seems to be an interesting story here, but I’m not sure what that story is yet.? Alas, this more suited for a tagline than a logline.? What’s the difference between the two?? A tagline is targeted to movie viewers.? A logline is targeted to movie makers.? ? And movie makers are looking for specific information in a logline.
What are movie makers looking for?? A specifically defined protagonist who is motivated by an inciting incident to pursue a specific objective goal.? What is the inciting incident that makes her “decide to come off the wall”?? And how does “make the world her stage” translated into a specific objective goal?
Check out the guidelines under “Our formula” for the elements that need to go into an industry acceptable logline.
See lessIn a cold country ruled by a hard-hearted king, three close rogues commit to a secret quest to find the girl from the prophecy so she could fulfill her destiny as the second Follower and help put an end to the dread of the emerging NightSouls.
Concur with mikepedley85 about the problem of using terms for a fantasy world that right now exists only in your mind."Second Follower" -- what is that supposed to mean? I have no idea what the dramatic significance? of such a character.? "NightSouls" -- who are they? and what makes them so bad theyRead more
Concur with mikepedley85 about the problem of using terms for a fantasy world that right now exists only in your mind.
“Second Follower” — what is that supposed to mean? I have no idea what the dramatic significance? of such a character.? “NightSouls” — who are they? and what makes them so bad they must be defeated?
Characters and situations should be introduced in terms that the typical logline reader should already be familiar with.? Save the terms unique to your fantasy world? for exposition in the script.
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