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A group of subjects in a sleep experiment are stalked by multidimensional entities awakened to rip their spirits apart.
The logline sets up a situation for a plot but doesn't follow through with a complete plot.? More to the point, it doesn't designate the inciting incident? that sets the plot in motion.? Nor does it indicate who the protagonist is nor what the objective goal is, what he/she must do to overcome the pRead more
The logline sets up a situation for a plot but doesn’t follow through with a complete plot.? More to the point, it doesn’t designate the inciting incident? that sets the plot in motion.? Nor does it indicate who the protagonist is nor what the objective goal is, what he/she must do to overcome the predicament. ? The logline merely presents them as hapless victims.
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See lessA closeted, sultry actress and a depressed, overachieving high school senior begrudgingly form a bond to overthrow a crazed anarchist bent on strengthening the divide between their two different lifestyles.
This version of the logline raises more questions that curiosity? in my mind. Like:Is this conceived as a movie with dual protagonists?? And what's the inciting incident that leads the two to bond for a common purpose?And what is the anarchist doing, specifically, that creates the wedge issue betweeRead more
This version of the logline raises more questions that curiosity? in my mind. Like:
Is this conceived as a movie with dual protagonists?? And what’s the inciting incident that leads the two to bond for a common purpose?
And what is the anarchist doing, specifically, that creates the wedge issue between them?? And why is he targeting them?
And what is so wrong with a divide between two lifestyles that it must be narrowed?? That happens all the? time in real life.? What’s at stake if they fail to overthrow him?? Why MUST the divide be narrowed?
And by definition, anarchists reject power structures, hierarchies — so what is there for the duo to overthrow?? Particularly, when anarchists are the ones who are supposed to be doing the overthrowing.
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See lessPicked up by social services after years of living off the grid, a veteran suffering from PTSD and his teenage daughter struggle to integrate into society.
I take your point, Karel.? Maybe:Picked up by social services after years of living together off the grid, a teenage girl struggles to live a normal life with a father who cannot.(27 words)?I loved the film, too.? Brought back memories of living off the grid.? And I am a fan of the director, Debra GRead more
I take your point, Karel.? Maybe:
Picked up by social services after years of living together off the grid, a teenage girl struggles to live a normal life with a father who cannot.
(27 words)
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I loved the film, too.? Brought back memories of living off the grid.? And I am a fan of the director, Debra Granik.
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