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A killer for hire, with PTSD, continues to murder while she anguishes and procrastinates over another assigned job. . . . Her psychologist.
And interesting premise, but...What's at stake?? Not just in terms of the emotional support she loses if she kills her shrink, but also in terms of what she will lose if she doesn't kill him?She's described as a killer for hire , a free lancer.? ?Doesn't that mean? can she turn down the job offer??Read more
And interesting premise, but…
What’s at stake?? Not just in terms of the emotional support she loses if she kills her shrink, but also in terms of what she will lose if she doesn’t kill him?
She’s described as a killer for hire , a free lancer.? ?Doesn’t that mean? can she turn down the job offer?? Why didn’t she turn it down?? Why? is it an offer she can’t refuse?? Why MUST she kill him?
See lessUpside down in a binge, pacifist Hank Thompson loses a key that belongs to the Russian mob; now Hank must find the key or die trying.
A logline pitches a film or series to the movie makers, not the movie viewers.? They're the ones you're trying to invest millions of dollars and years of their precious time in your project.? Even if you withhold it from the audience for the 1st season, the producers may want to know in order to detRead more
A logline pitches a film or series to the movie makers, not the movie viewers.? They’re the ones you’re trying to invest millions of dollars and years of their precious time in your project.? Even if you withhold it from the audience for the 1st season, the producers may want to know in order to determine if the series has “legs”.? Just saying.
And if everyone who knows about the key is killed, that needs to be in the logline;? that’s the story hook for the 1st season:? everyone who knows about or came into possession of the key is killed.? He’s next.? Which raises the dramatic question: Why?
See lessUpside down in a binge, pacifist Hank Thompson loses a key that belongs to the Russian mob; now Hank must find the key or die trying.
>>>Upside down in a binge, Not really necessary for the purpose of a logline. Several question hang upside down in my mind: How did a pacifist come to possess a key belonging to the Russian mob? Maybe this will intrigue a logline reader, pique his curiousity to read the script and find theRead more
>>>Upside down in a binge,
Not really necessary for the purpose of a logline.
Several question hang upside down in my mind:
How did a pacifist come to possess a key belonging to the Russian mob?
Maybe this will intrigue a logline reader, pique his curiousity to read the script and find the answer.
But…
What is the dramatic importance of the key to the mob? Why MUST they get it back? A logline reader needs to know the answer to this question up front.
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