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A single father/cat burglar needs to steal an ancient artifact in order to help his ailing son, grabs the attention of a 700-year-old warlord; now he must outwit CAIN to save the life of his kidnaped son.
It's not clear, not obvious how stealing the artifact is necessary to? heal his son.? Is it for the money he can make selling it?? Or for magical healing properties in the artifact? (The genre is fantasy which makes that a possibility.)And is Cain the warlord, or someone the warlord sends to do hisRead more
It’s not clear, not obvious how stealing the artifact is necessary to? heal his son.? Is it for the money he can make selling it?? Or for magical healing properties in the artifact? (The genre is fantasy which makes that a possibility.)
And is Cain the warlord, or someone the warlord sends to do his hatchet work?
See lessIn Nebraska during the Dust Bowl era, a straight-laced bastard descendant of Jesse James has to travel to Devils Nest to help save the tribe of his half uncle, but shit goes south when the closing of a dam and a one-eyed Kansas City gangster threaten to sink his grandfather’s buried gold for good.
Agree with Richiev.? The buried gold is? the McGuffin? gimmick (per Alfred Hitchcock), but the current version buries it again. Nor is it clear what the tribe must be saved from, the drought or the dam or...?
Agree with Richiev.? The buried gold is? the McGuffin? gimmick (per Alfred Hitchcock), but the current version buries it again.
Nor is it clear what the tribe must be saved from, the drought or the dam or…?
See lessWhen a killer threatens the streets of Austin, a Texas Blues loving police detective with a photographic memory, and her charismatic, gay partner are forced to form an unlikely, and tempestuous alliance with former professional athlete both detectives suspect of murder.
>>>>included the partner in the logline.Okay.? That can make sense for a series.Have you thought about making her lesbian and him straight? I mean, if you're going to play the sexual orientation card...And does it need to be set in? liberal, glamorous Austin?? Could it be set in a city oRead more
>>>>included the partner in the logline.
Okay.? That can make sense for a series.
Have you thought about making her lesbian and him straight? I mean, if you’re going to play the sexual orientation card…
And does it need to be set in? liberal, glamorous Austin?? Could it be set in a city or large town in arid vastness of West Texas or the high plains of the Panhandle or the piney woods of East Texas — somewhere her (or his) sexual orientation would come into conflict with more conservative social values? Austin may have the glitz and glamour, but in my sojourns through the Lonely Star State I found more interesting people and situations outside the urban fleshpots of Austin, Houston? and Dallas-Ft Worth.
Just a thought.
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