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  1. Posted: August 3, 2020In: SciFi

    In a post apocalyptic nuclear bunker – a guilt ridden AI program that triggered WWIII tries to convince the last man on earth to raise it’s “child”, an innocent AI that does not know war.

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    Added an answer on August 5, 2020 at 11:39 am

    The revised version casts the AI as the protagonist, the one with an objective goal. IOW: it places the AI in the driver's seat of the plot. Whose story is it? Who is supposed to be in the driver's seat, driving the plot? Also, why would the man agree to raise the baby AI? What's in it for him? WhatRead more

    The revised version casts the AI as the protagonist, the one with an objective goal. IOW: it places the AI in the driver’s seat of the plot. Whose story is it? Who is supposed to be in the driver’s seat, driving the plot?

    Also, why would the man agree to raise the baby AI? What’s in it for him? What does he stand to gain by raising the AI? What does he stand to lose if he refuses?

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  2. Posted: August 4, 2020In: Comedy

    An arrogant crime scene cleaner and her impressionable partner/best friend begin a messy murder spree to provide the work that’ll save their business from going under.

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    Added an answer on August 5, 2020 at 11:08 am

    Still perplexed. What's so funny about the pre-meditated murder of innocent people? Ditto about "arrogant" as a character flaw congruent with either her profession or the plot. Cold-hearted--yes. Arrogant conveys to me the connotation that she considers her work beneath her talents (and ego), that sRead more

    Still perplexed. What’s so funny about the pre-meditated murder of innocent people?

    Ditto about “arrogant” as a character flaw congruent with either her profession or the plot. Cold-hearted–yes. Arrogant conveys to me the connotation that she considers her work beneath her talents (and ego), that she aspires to a more worthy profession; hence, her objective goal would be to do more than just be able to pay the bills.

    fwiw.

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  3. Posted: August 4, 2020In: Comedy

    An arrogant crime scene cleaner and her impressionable partner/best friend begin a messy murder spree to provide the work that’ll save their business from going under.

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    Added an answer on August 5, 2020 at 12:20 am

    I'm perplexed. Who are their clients? Who is going to pay them to clean up the crime messes they themselves create?

    I’m perplexed. Who are their clients? Who is going to pay them to clean up the crime messes they themselves create?

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