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An arrogant crime scene cleaner and her impressionable partner/best friend begin a messy murder spree to provide the work that’ll save their business from going under.
P.S. My multiple notes are a sign that I think it's an interesting, marketable premise. But...
P.S. My multiple notes are a sign that I think it’s an interesting, marketable premise. But…
See lessAn arrogant crime scene cleaner and her impressionable partner/best friend begin a messy murder spree to provide the work that’ll save their business from going under.
Still not sold on the genre. Scanned my (diminished) memory bank for a comedy film or series with a similar premise (intentional murder of innocents), came up blank. Can you name 2 or 3? I suggest it might be more marketable tagged as a crime drama with moments of absurd, dark comedy. (The script I'Read more
Still not sold on the genre. Scanned my (diminished) memory bank for a comedy film or series with a similar premise (intentional murder of innocents), came up blank. Can you name 2 or 3?
I suggest it might be more marketable tagged as a crime drama with moments of absurd, dark comedy. (The script I’m writing based upon my experiences working in the LAPD in Hollywood has many moments of insanely absurd, dark comedy, because those moments actually happened. But I’m tagging it as a crime drama.)
My final 2.5 cents on that point.
And still not sold on the adjective “arrogant”. Come to think about it, her actions, her objective goal speak volumes about her character; any adjective would be superfluous. She’s cold-hearted, ruthless, cynical — a psychopath.
My final 2.5 cents on that point.
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A plus size woman competes with her svelte, gold-digger friend for the man of her dreams. Agree with Mike Pedley that it's a problematical premise given that sexual attraction is a politically incorrect, rather hard-wired aspect of human behavior.
A plus size woman competes with her svelte, gold-digger friend for the man of her dreams.
Agree with Mike Pedley that it’s a problematical premise given that sexual attraction is a politically incorrect, rather hard-wired aspect of human behavior.
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