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  1. Posted: August 30, 2018In: Drama

    When a Barrister with early onset Alzheimers obtains a mysterious brief, he must break his professional code to restore justice by convincing a Court to set aside his own client?s acquittal.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 31, 2018 at 9:54 pm

    >>> starts a new campaign of terror It's a new post-acquittal crime.? New facts, new evidence.? Prima facie, I don't see how any violation of the legal professional code is required to assist in prosecuting the case.? What's the legal and moral dilemma?

    >>> starts a new campaign of terror

    It’s a new post-acquittal crime.? New facts, new evidence.? Prima facie, I don’t see how any violation of the legal professional code is required to assist in prosecuting the case.? What’s the legal and moral dilemma?

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  2. Posted: August 30, 2018In: Drama

    When a shelter bully blackmails a recovering junkie, the leader of a small group of homeless takes a heroic stand to protect her.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 31, 2018 at 3:59 am

    As the others said. And what is "an heroic stand"?? What happens at that moment?? How does that translate into an objective goal?

    As the others said.

    And what is “an heroic stand”?? What happens at that moment?? How does that translate into an objective goal?

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  3. Posted: August 30, 2018In: Drama

    When a Barrister with early onset Alzheimers obtains a mysterious brief, he must break his professional code to restore justice by convincing a Court to set aside his own client?s acquittal.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 30, 2018 at 11:30 pm

    On the legal technicalities entailed in the plot, your curriculum vitae indicates you know enough about the practice of law to write credibly about what he can do to right the wrong by violating the professional code.Agree with Richiev that "restore justice"? needs to be spelled out in specific termRead more

    On the legal technicalities entailed in the plot, your curriculum vitae indicates you know enough about the practice of law to write credibly about what he can do to right the wrong by violating the professional code.

    Agree with Richiev that “restore justice”? needs to be spelled out in specific terms of what’s at stake if he doesn’t succeed.? What is the cost of failure?? Who is the victim of the injustice?

    And per mikepedley85,? why is Alzheimer’s? relevant?? It’s a good complication, but it needs to be more integrated into the logline.? Must he achieve his objective goal before he no longer has the memory to do so?? Does this imply that the outcome turns on a memory — something only he knows about or was a witness to. How is it a pivotal complication to how the plot plays out?

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