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  1. Posted: June 29, 2018In: Fantasy

    When his reflection changes to a young woman who needs his help, a reclusive author must enter Miraland and lead the rebellion against the crooked regime before the corruption spills into the real world.

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    Interesting premise.? A missing logical link in my mind is how does he enter Miraland?? How does he know how to enter?

    Interesting premise.? A missing logical link in my mind is how does he enter Miraland?? How does he know how to enter?

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  2. Posted: June 29, 2018In: Crime

    A detective being investigated on historic corruption charges becomes an ideal candidate for an off-the books assignment to locate missing evidence.

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    Added an answer on June 29, 2018 at 9:06 pm

    What IS the inciting incident?? What's the logical connection between the corruption charges and the assignment,? how does the? former trigger the latter?

    What IS the inciting incident?? What’s the logical connection between the corruption charges and the assignment,? how does the? former trigger the latter?

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  3. Posted: May 22, 2018In: Examples

    When a con man discovers he has a 14-year old daughter, he struggles to bond with her while shielding her from his criminal occupation.

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    Added an answer on June 29, 2018 at 12:36 pm

    >>>The logline doesn?t suggest an endingA logline doesn't have to suggest how a story will end.? A logline should never give away the ending.? It need only raise a question of whether the protagonist will achieve his objective goal.>>>which makes it sound boring.The movie didn't maRead more

    >>>The logline doesn?t suggest an ending

    A logline doesn’t have to suggest how a story will end.? A logline should never give away the ending.? It need only raise a question of whether the protagonist will achieve his objective goal.

    >>>which makes it sound boring.

    The movie didn’t make back its money at the box-office.

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